Sora and company crash land in Equestria and discover that Equestria is in the grips of a Heartless attack and race to offer their assistance. They soon discover a dark plot that seeks to use the Elements of Harmony to unleash the power of Kingdom Hearts in favor of a great evil. Takes place around two years after the second game.
MAKE MOAR XD but seriously,make more
I like it a lot make more please.
Lots of potential, but it's very rushed. Shouldn't you have told us a little more about Sora's thoughts upon his first sighting of Ponyville? Also, what about Zecora? Wouldn't Twilight want to check on her friend?
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It was only a test run; I plan on putting in more details when I write the next chapter, whenever that is
Really cool. Keep it up!
Only mistake that I found in this chapter was that you accidentally called Dash by the name Firefly. Other than that, you're good.
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not me aperently the admins are trolling
Naw, you got it down. And, i know i'm being picky here but, THANK you for using proper grammar. Your story is well-written and I am looking forward to seeing more of it.
Cool story bro
393246 late response is late, admins were changing gen4 character names with their gen1 counterpart names if they had one, example that you mentioned Rainbow Dash as Firefly
Here's a song that's good for a boss fight.
Rage Awakened
more please
Your fic is the first I've come across that includes Sora, Donald, and Goofy...so kindly continue
Sorry for the long wait I’ve been busy
Third chapter, great!
Love the moment between Sora and Rarity
Slight typo: you refer to Sweet Apple Acres as Sweat Apple Acres.
So far, this looks interesting. It could use a bit better pacing, but overall it's good. I'll be keeping an eye on it.
The one thing that you forgot to mention is that Nobody's only appear if the person or pony that lost there heart had an exceptionally strong heart
awesome story, y u on hiatus!?!?
r u gonna finish it?
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Eventually I've got four other stories going at the moment and this one is on the back burner till i'm done with them
My presaved stuff may or may not be gone as of yet I have no idea, on the bright side I’m not going to be working on anything that I’ve already got plans saved till I know that it’s gone. What this means is that I actually have time to devote to this story. Please leave some comments or question mostly because I want to know what you guys think about some of the stuff in this chapter.
Shining armor still wouldn't be able to beat Sora in a battle due to the fact that the keyblades is designed to pure hearts but it was also made to dispel magical barriers so shining armor more or less would be fucked in a battle
yes you updated
I’ve got you locked in and I’ll be there the second that you call.Riku told him. Sora nodded and opened his eyes before walking over to one of the circles.
He placed his hand on the edge and willed Riku to join him;
HAND!??!? He's supposed to have hooves !!
Rarity doesn't really say "Darling" in every sentence either tbh, but aside from that, I'm REALLY digging this one. I'm a major KH fan, so I hope to see more in the future!!
You sure took time, good job BTW.
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whoops, nice catch i write at two or three in the morning so stuff like that slips through the cracks occasionally
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yeah that's why they never did fight, i figured he deserved his dignity
953040 that more or less pissed me off when he said he'd smash the keyblade In his skull I was like fuck no you won't I adore kingdom hearts I even read the manga Roxas is still my favorite charecter
first off, awesome story, secondly, awesome banter, and thirdly in exchange for continuing this here is some woona adorablenessrainbowdash.net/file/twidash-20120626T194224-t7nfucq.jpeg
Sora and Riku are now pros at their job.
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aww that is awesome, and it gives me a reason to write another chapter, thank you!
963924 next chapter the cute will be doubled!
Ok two things. One you guys rock for all the positive feedback from last chapter. Two I know that in game they can only travel to Disney worlds but i think that if they can get to Equestria then they should manage to get pretty much anywhere else in the multiverse.
979866 oh that would be nice im a complete kingdom hearts nerd also I'm good with Luna and riku point it in your direction bro
i can't help but smile as i read this.... and as promised here is the double dosage of woona!!!encrypted-tbn2.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSE-r3G-euxeu8fL7uf-J0oH-AY2xlkUiNGMLgnnAVYskqtKbzHnw encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSA40GMDU0MvUYZjyGbPSYKUW1bmIKUj8hWmi8Cmuc_XdDEXgRQ
I know that they go to Disney worlds, like you mentioned, but you gotta admit this area is PERFECT for Kingdom Hearts!! I even thought this should have been a cross over ages before I saw this as a fanfic. Discord would have been a perfect boss, but I see you're doing something just as great here, so I'm glad that this is a thing, and I would like to personally thank you for doing it, regardless of the non-Disney-ness :D.
“I think one of the girls is one. I think you meant to say is :"I think one of the girls is gone."
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Nope, Sora's saying that he's pretty sure that Fluttershy is a healer
1004917 Oopps, .Now if you will excuse me I must return to playing Kingdom Hearts 2.
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Lucky, my mom gave away my PS2 without asking
Dunno if anyone else pointed this out but
"Twilight told them and pointed with a hood at a dirt path that was running through the forest."
Hood?
YAY! 4 more Chapters! Love The story so far. 7 moustaches out of 8:
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Thanks for catching that this is one of my stories where I don't have an editor so stuff like that falls through the cracks, enjoy the rest
i miss my kingdom hearts....
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I do too
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what if this nobody turned out to be roxas........dunn dunn duuunnnn.......that would cause some trouble.........or it wasnt but he still showed up somehow and began to help sora and company.
will sora's other modes show up?wisdom, valor, master,and heartless
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Well as i understand it( keep in mind that i stopped following the story after 2 because i lacked the systems to play them so i'm going off research) Roxas is inside Sora's head along with like two or three other people and they're just chilling.
As for other forms Sora is definitely going to be duel wielding at some point I just don't know when
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ehehehehe funny thing just popped in my head
"yo sora were out of snacks....can you think some up for us?"
*cookies appear*
"thanx"
how scared do you think the mane six would get if they seen sora in the heartless/pony form?or heartless/human form?
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Extremely, also that's a great thought, I think you just made my day!
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YOUS WELCOME