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Mimic Kairatta


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Equestria has many legends and stories. Sometimes they are told one way, sometimes another. When a legend shared by two races comes back, how will Equestria react to the return of one such legend. One that the Griffon Kingdom speak highly of?



Special thanks to BluegrassBrooke, BookMarkofCanterlot, and Brandedahall for helping me edit and write the story.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 20 )

Hmm very nice begining like most LOHaV Stories... being stuck in stone but you gave usa nice bit of background info to that.
i dunno why but this makes me think of Typhon from Land of Friendship and magic
If this goes further you can keep the like and fav!

Wait who did he dress as at the con?

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Now where's the fun in revealing that? :twilightsmile:

4255846 I guess your right there is no fun ok keep going -tank

Eh....this one's....interesting...you've got a few problems with using tenses in that you can't decide whether to use present or past....and there are a few errors where you forgot either punctuation, ending letters, or both. I recommend a look over your chapter, and to have it vetted by another editor in the future before releasing chapters.

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Man I had it vetted through 3 of them. Not sure how the tenses got missed it.

4258234 Most non-professional vetters, or even the ones with less experience tend to focus more on the actual errors than the words used or the format. It takes time to build up that kind of skill.

Now that I think about the possible characters why is gilda not there she might be a good charachter? -tank

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Well, I don't think she'd be at a museum as it wouldn't be "cool" enough to visit.

4289045 no like they meet up or something besides he left all ready -tank

I have a feeling he's about to become very angry.

4356079 Wouldn't be surprised

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Can't think of a reason not to. Sure.

5638280 Wow, that sounds like a bad booty call. :derpytongue2::facehoof:

Wow, the latest chapter is larger than the last three combined.

I could hear them complaining why they were here. Then something about cosmic coincidence and god.

That Red vs Blue reference tho.

Pls make more this story is very cool and has air bending Griffins and for once the the character has not spawned in the pony country

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