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OfficialDerp


Amateur writer. I don't write as much as I used to. Sometimes I forget that life isn't Tumblr.

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Technology is very scarce in Equestria, but it seems quite prominent in one area. This is where our story takes place. This place is full of new things, things nopony but those inside know about. There are things that normal ponies wouldn't think possible. This is a place full of new minds, new ponies. Most of which are geniuses.

This story does not follow one of said geniuses. It follows just an average pony who happens to work at this place. There's not much special about her, except for the fact that she was chosen to try out a new machine. A new machine that will allow her to experience technology "first hoof".

As she explores this world, she realizes something. She's becoming part of it.

Will she make it out in time? Or will she end up digitized?

It's your choice.



(Pinkie shows up later in story)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 13 )

*Looks at cover art*

This... this is... this is a troll fic, right?

4241270 I don't think it is. Unfortunately, some people are just...really bad at art. :unsuresweetie:

Yep, I'm ready. But...you do know that the epilogue goes after the end of the story...right?

4242927
It's supposed to look artistic, not perfect.
I made it so it would look like that... :fluttershysad:

4241270
And no, it's not. Again, I wanted the cover art to look artistic. But I'm not used to writing stories like this, so be prepared. :P

4242933
Fixed it. :derpytongue2: I wasn't sure which was which, so I asked someone. They lied to me! :fluttershbad:

4245097 I see...I'm sorry if I sounded rude.

4245110 It's ok. I forgive you. Just enjoy the story! :twilightsmile:

In a way, this kinda reminds me of Eureka. Have fun with this is all I can say.

4246379
:rainbowhuh: What's Eureka? Never heard of it. If it's a story, is it good?

4259209

Eureka was a show that used to be on regular programming. It's about a guy who just moved into a town that has unexplainably smart people (in the first episode, a 12-13 year-old kid had some college textbook for one of HIS classes), and becomes the Sheriff there. The things that are there come from AI houses to drones going haywire. Pretty good show, but I think it got cancelled. Shame, if it was

4261423
Oh, sounds interesting. Of course, that's not what this is going to be about at all. (These aren't spoilers since it's kind of explained a bit already) These characters are all just test subjects, except for the ones in charge, of course.
And before any of you ask, yes, I do play the Portal games too much. :derpytongue2:

4261674

I figured it wasn't, but still. Kind of what it reminded me of.

On another note, I need to play Portal again sometime sooner or later.

4262220
*whispers* You totally should... :derpytongue2:

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