Now that the cryssaling process is done, Spike begins a new chapter of his life, and decides to get a job. however, he is met with limitations of both his own making, as well as those presented by others.
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- Oh, yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
- But, poor Spike.
poor Spike
i want to see more SpikeXLuna, maybe have Celestia find out about Spikes crush and set up a date or something
You forgot that Spike is a good cutter jewelry, at least good enough to impress a fashionister who has been working with jewelry throughout your life.
Spike possesses also counted in Canterlot, good enough to get a celebrity to bring a small rural town.
Spike can also send messages magical. Of course, he can hopefully expect some of that expertise beyond just send them to Celestia.
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Now, it seems more like a revenge for all other dates that Luna threw Celestia another fic.
Oh, my. Why this haven't more likes?
4271975 cuz you haven't been doin' your job and spreading the word!! get on it!
No the biggest awkward turtle was when my best friend called my brother cute...still makes me shiver..
What the fuck, Granny?
Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo
LOL
you know there should be a small scribe with Celestia that takes her marriage joke as an edict of law and start filling out the marriage papers, then on her break gossips with others, soon everyone is talking about the royal marriage between Spike and Luna
VICTORY!
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I see their plans going up in flames of emerald. Literally and Figuratively
WHY THIS HAVEN'T MORE LIKES?
damn strait she does
*insert sexual suggestion involving an aged up cmc and spike*
4362180 She's from the south.
I know how stubborn we can be.
4247357 Smurf that Smurf! That's a smurfing good idea!
Buttons mom... HAREM! A HAREM WITH ONLY HER AND SPIKE! It legit counts if a female has enough sexiness for seven women.
4457779 inserts strictly non-sexual personal restrictions about horses
Love this story. But you already gussed that.
On a completly unrelated note, you guys remember that Spike based Anime, right?
Yeah, that is oming out once we have... Say, 230 more people to sign the petition.
LINK
Still, love the story.
Times like these spike needs to just roast a pony and call it a day
Rares, please, help the little Spikey-Wikey.
prejudice ignorance strikes again; they don't care about facts, they only care about justifying their preconceived notions
4573561 unfortunately, your right. there are people in the world who don't care what actually happened, and will fight to the death over their own prejudiced versions of events.
damn! these ponies are such racist bastards
maybe Spike could go to the Crystal Empire and start his own business there
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Damn straight. He's considered a hero there, anyway. It's time for him to vacate this literally one-horse town anyway. Spike's too good for Ponyville.
Edit: I could understand that Rarity may be somewhat partial to Ponyville on account of this is her hometown and birthplace, but considering that she is a huge VIP and her resounding success, I can't see Rarity staying at her part-time job as gem inspector after she saw how prejudice bullied someone like Spike from a job that he is highly qualified for, all because of his heritage (which he can't change). Sickening....
Before this is over I forsee 3 certain princesses having a nice chat with spike. One being concerned, another flustered, and the third royally pissed to levels unfathomable to pony kind. It will be glorious
4952560 -he knows too much!
-end him swiftly, before he talks!
4952565 if you believe you have what it takes then fill free to try but know now my end will only come with the collapsing of a grand star and not before then. If your mettle be strong then step into my abyss and let my shadows welcome you to your grave.
Of course this only happens once your story is fully finish so thus becomes a moot point.
4952617 hmm. hardcore. what comes after that? OH OH, I remember! sing it with me kids!
tuck your head between your legs and kiss your butt goodbye!
you can't win Luna, just give in
it's the best thing for both you and Spike 
When is Spike going to finally realize that he sent that stuff to the Princess and get it back. They all can't be that stupid besides that I love the story and I hope Spike gets a good break/job soon. Also a I think Luna/Spike would be cute and the hybrid they'd make would be awesome.
4988064 have you read the most recent chapter? or the fifth chapter? he knows, he just can't do jack about it. Luna's the one freaking out.
4992584 I've read all the chapters don't remember when it said he can't control the fire. So if if he just wanted to burn something for no good reason, there'd be a 50% chance it would go to the eldest princess.(I keep spelling her name wrong).
4993199 even in the show, he's had issues with sending things by accident when he sneezed or hiccuped. explaining his lack of finer control should have been part of an inherent understanding that puberty was goofing with his life, making what had before been very easy rather complicated. as far as it going to Luna instead of Celestia, it's called plot convenience, so there.
oh, and i wrote the story, and i reread it every time i start up again. i know for a fact that i mentioned that he knows where they've been going, and the issue is that he can't get it back without asking Celestia.
4996145 Guess I need to reread some chapters sorrry.
NOoooooo not hiatus !
I know it's a bit of a deus ex machina, but I was kinda hoping that Celestia would show up and either throw the unruly mob into the dungeons for attacking the official royal prince (because I like to think that Celestia's Spike's mom, though I forget this story's view on that) or at least stopping the attack and actually letting the children tell the adults what exactly happened, WITHOUT THEM COMPLETELY IGNORING THEM LIKE PIECES OF ******** *****
but... c'est la vie, ou du moins c'est son.
Well, awesome rescue. Twilight channeling Luna is brilliant.
Pretty good story. Lotsa good interactions and overall interesting plot. Well done. A shame there aren't any more chapters.
I hope to see it continued, preferably sooner rather than later. So, happy writing, when you get to it.
More story please. Is good story.
You can has moustache
ATTENTION, BY ORDER OF HER MAJESTYS PRINCESS CELESTIA AND PRINCESS LUNA AS WELL AS I,GENERAL VOID HERE BY DEMAND THE EXECUTION OF ONE MISS GLITTER ALL AGREE SAY I ALL OPOSED SAY NAY.
Can I make a correction? It should say Equestria not Ponyville...
*sigh* now we need a story about Mrs.Cake and her time in the octagon. Which means sleepless nights waiting for it to be written
6795817 itll be a bonus. dont worry, but dont get excited either
Nice story! Seems like the perfect job for a dragon but I'd like to see some more with this story, I have hopes that you'll do a third installment, as it would be hilarious and we never did settle Lunas paranoia about being wood by spIke haha. I understand if you need a break, writing is difficult work and you'll need your time to get it done but know you have a supporter and follower always!
Smithing is brilliant for a dragon.
Overall, a good story. I particularly enjoyed the shaming of the angry mob.
You have some general style issues here and there, but they are hard to say something specific about, there is just something a little generic and bland in some of this, though the story is good all in all. More specifically, you have some odd or wrong choices for words here and there, a few bits where you need some better scene changes and some small bits in formatting that drags the quality down a little.
Also, you parenthesis' are kinda unnecessary and doesn't add to the story. And some of your references are jarring, like mentioning an Irish accent and the second coming, even if you try to pin the last one on Luna. That also kinda ought to have been third coming, didn't it? The second wasn't something good after all.
Also, I'm a little sad there wasn't a scene with Celestia getting cheered up by Spike or someone.
But make no mistake, I was entertained. So it was good. Otherwise, I wouldn't have kept with it to the end. Some things could have been better, but you made a pretty good story.
Cheers.
Hope we get another story after this one day. This as a really fun story.