• Member Since 15th Sep, 2012
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OBSIDI4N_DR4G0N


Born in the South and Raised in the Country, finally got to live in the city, but then went to a happy middle ground.

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There is love, peace and harmony throughout all of Equestria. With the only dangers being natural, there is little to worry about. That is until an old enemy returns with unknown intentions. "Is it all who feel this way or a few?" Meanwhile in Ponyville, little adventurers play and explore with every nook and cranny they can find. But sooner or latter, all good things must end, and our little heroes might have to grow up a bit, if they are to get back home alive!
-This is my first fan fiction, so please be gentle with any helpful commentary
-All Oc's belong to me
- blah blah blah, Ignore me and enjoy!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

"I have to pee."

Cracked me up!:rainbowlaugh:

9740783
Really? its been like... years... think its worth continuing?

9740791
I like it, perhaps all It needs is some tweaks here and there, but the premise is awesome and the idea is really interesting if you have the time this could be awesome :rainbowkiss:

9740792
I've honestly forgotten where I was going to take this story, besides between work and duties, I've not much time on my hands. I barely find time to read (books and fanfiction), i actually tend to stay up late when i find a really good read. Which sucks, when i have to get up early in the morning.

The premise seems rather interesting, with hints of a special magic system and lore lying just beneath. Also made me smile from time to time. Although the story could use quite a lot of work in terms of grammar, consistency and also, well, there is no general term for it, but let’s say pacing and information relevance. I’m aware this is an older story, but that doesn’t mean it cannot be polished into a better tale.

9796340
That and its been on hiatus for years, and I've no real motivation to work on it.

9796661
That’s a shame, it could be turned into a great story, but I understand.

9796671
I might pick it back up, whenever I have some real time to, but between the us army and school, and the fact i'd rather read than write... yeah.

9796698
Yeah, that seems like a pretty full schedule. Anyway, should you need some help with this or any other story in the future, feel free to let me know.

9796701
cool, will do... whenever I get the chance! lol

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