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Whispers in the Cliffs

After Applejack tells Apple Bloom the truth about her parents, the filly goes on a journey to find them.

This story will have two endings, a happy one and a sad one. Thank you for reading!

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 13th Apr 2014 · 1,127 words
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Chapter 2 · 13th Apr 2014 · 1,767 words
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Chapter 3 · 27th May 2014 · 1,196 words
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Mewaponny

Mewaponny #1 · Apr 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

you could probably fill this story out more instead of the "he said/she said" format. otherwise, I think this has the potential to be a great story.

also, FIRST POST!

DitzyDash

DitzyDash #2 · Apr 16th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Thanks for the advice! What is the "he said\she said" format?
Thank you so much! Glad you like it!

Poetical Nonsense

Poetical Nonsense #3 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Well, I think what Mewapony means is instead of just saying things like "Run!" said Rainbow, instead you would say things like "Run!" Rainbow exclaimed. So instead of just saying said all the time, you convey the way that they are saying it.

I'm not really sure though.