• Member Since 22nd Jan, 2014
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DitzyDash


I am a pegasister who loves writing and singing, and hopes to post many of my written works.

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After Applejack tells Apple Bloom the truth about her parents, the filly goes on a journey to find them.

This story will have two endings, a happy one and a sad one. Thank you for reading!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

you could probably fill this story out more instead of the "he said/she said" format.:applecry: otherwise, I think this has the potential to be a great story.:twilightsmile:


also, FIRST POST!:ajsmug:

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Thanks for the advice! :twilightsmile: What is the "he said\she said" format?
Thank you so much! Glad you like it! :pinkiehappy:

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Well, I think what Mewapony means is instead of just saying things like "Run!" said Rainbow, instead you would say things like "Run!" Rainbow exclaimed. So instead of just saying said all the time, you convey the way that they are saying it.

I'm not really sure though.:pinkiesmile:

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Okay! Thanks for the tips Poetical Nonsense and Mewaponny! :twilightsmile: I really do try not to say said, but sometimes I just can't think of anything else! :derpytongue2:

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