It pretty much is what the title says it is.
Vinyl Scratch isn't always tuff, strong and brave.
When a little, tiny bug shows up in her room, she'll definitely be the opposite.
And Octavia isn't too keen about this side of Vinyl.
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LOL. In rl, mosquitos spread some pretty nasty diseases.
Nice! Polish your writing style a bit and you'll be famous in no time!
Also, tiny amount of punctuation mistake, but excellent overall!
Thanks for the tips.
And it's true mosquitos are not the best bug to be in a room with when you're sleeping.
Loving this so far!
How long is the whole story going to be though?
this was enjoyable. I liked it.
>>CanterlotGarden
Thanks.
>>CanterlotGarden
Thanks.
Guughh, I am going to have to agree with vinyl here. Mosquitos are the fucking worst.
Not bad, but could use a bit of work on the grammar and spelling here and there.
Also, any particular reason Vinyl keeps spontaneously changing her gender?
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It's my first fic. I was trying to go for roleplaying.
I'm going to release a new, different story, way better than this. Probably today or tomorrow.
4239725 Don't get me wrong, it was pretty good. I liked the concept, and for the most part I was able to look past the issues. A good rule of thumb, though: read the story aloud. If there's anything that doesn't make sense, it'll be a lot more obvious when it comes out of your mouth. Just a little editing advice. Anyway, great job for a first story; keep up the good work!
Oh, you should read my second story, I've been getting a lot of people favoriting it, and saying it's good. It's not finished though. But it's still good.
While the story was enjoyable. I do agree with deli73<< said. A little more polishing up and you'll be popular in no time.
Maybe an editor would help?
Just suggesting it.
Thanks for the tips, but this was a practice story, my other are better.
Did I miss an anthro tag?
Was funny and cute but seriously I figured most things as anthro when I'm not particularly attached to those stories.
Nothing to be ashamed of Vinyl, I once used my mini glock to kill a spider
Well I liked for the sake of just having enjoyed the story... I liked... regardless of the fact that I do not like the idea of lesbian ponies or gays...
Also I do believe the editing could use a bit of a touch up - which I wouldn't mind helping with, if the author would accept.
But over all it was a good story. :scootangel
4535600 Well, this is my very first fic, which I don't really like that much after some thinking and never really had a chance to really edit it.
4535982 Well that's very understandable.
This is so funny! Thpugh I feel bad for Vinyl though I agree with Octavia: They're just freakin' bugs!
4646378 Thanks, but I have to agree with Vinyl. I mean if anything pops out of nowhere, bug or not, I would be freaking out.
4647382 True. Hey, are you gonna continue "What Howls at Night"?
4647926 Of course. I'm working on the next chapter, but I don't think it'll come so soon.
4648071 Ok.
4648121 I'll let you know when the next chapter is out, though.
4648142 Thanks!
4648200 No problem.
I love this XD
This is amazing! But still needs some editing.
Have you ever considered doing a sequel where some members of the mane 6 come in and help Vinyl get over her fear?
5719020 Never thought of it.
5729925 Oh...
Well, at least I gave you the idea.
5729976 True. You are good and you should feel good.
5729981 Thanks
Awww poor vinal I can totally relate