A nice little short about the wasteland of Equestria- a town, a pub and several ponies with whiskey thrown in the mix. The basis of all good stories.
I like my girls how I like my coffee; in a plastic cup.
A nice little short about the wasteland of Equestria- a town, a pub and several ponies with whiskey thrown in the mix. The basis of all good stories.
Just so you know your story was added to the Fallout Equestria Group! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!
Awww cuite ending! Any idea about how many words the final copy is going to be?
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Edited and finalised! It's only a few word longer, but we are go. Things have been changed up quite some, the grammar improved where it was lacking and it's a little more descriptive in some places.
I also integrated a few links for the songs to make things easier.
(Yes, I do know that it's been over a year, but I kinda' forgot about this for a good long bit.)
Reading back over this now makes me realise that I'm rather unhappy with it: I feel like it was rushed and too short, it has multiple grammatical errors and the general tone doesn't quite hit the mark of what I intended. The beginning is especially irksome as it comes off as edgy. It was a first attempt at writing an actual story, though that doesn't excuse it as I know that I can do better. The environment was intentionally left relatively vague yet it still wasn't fleshed-out enough and the the fact that there is a clear quote of dialogue defeats the written style I was trying as I wanted there to be no dialogue whatsoever (obviously, another story would likely not follow this pattern).
These aren't all of my issues but I've text-walled my own story enough. I will not be making any changes as I believe that my mistakes may provide learning opportunities for however few people read this and that simply writing a new story which fixes these mistakes would be beneficial as the two could then be compared to see which is more effective storytelling.