• Published 18th Jul 2014
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Cadence Control - scribe-feather



After finding some old books about hypnosis in the Crystal Kingdom's library, Cadance decides to put what she learns to the test. (ABDL, Adult themed)

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Comments ( 23 )

Why am i enjoying this? :pinkiecrazy:
On another note, how long until the reveal and storm?

What I learned from this is that the Princess of Love becomes an autocrat through unusual means.

I can see it already. Months later all communication is lost to Crystal Empire. The worried princess Celestia sends the Elements of Harmony to investige, and behold, the Season 5 villain. Cadence and her foalified army of crystal diaper ponies.

Huh, this could be bad, for the crystal Ponies.
Turned into Candace's play things. :trollestia:
Not bad thanks for the diversion
Thanks

Decadence strikes again!

I forsee Ponies finding out that something's terribly wrong.

The FUCK did I just read *shoots self in the head*

Comment posted by Freewing Alchemist P deleted Jul 26th, 2014

ugh that fucking bitch....

4757445 I couldn't have put it better myself.

Its over already?? Really? I was kinda hoping for more. :(

Freaking hot.

That is all.

Even the parts which are not to everyone's taste, like the hypnosis stuff, are written in quite an intelligent and sometimes really funny way, making it thoroughly entertaining to read. And the rest is very sensual and potent. Good story, nice work.

I hope hypnosis will seep into Shining Armor's consciousness... There have to be severe consequences to playing with one's mind. :pinkiecrazy:

I want to see more chapters. I like the reverse foalplay I found this story very funny. I saw you requested ideas for future chapters how about turning shining armor into a female and female foal with a new name to boot. I think that would be funny. just an idea I look forward to your later chapters:twilightsmile:

Why is it that just about every single hypnosis story out there gos right for the *character using hypnosis immediately loses all morals and turns into a self-serving, hedonistic villain * every bucking time!?

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Funniest Mature Story I've Ever Read

Best diaper fic i've read yet! :derpytongue2:

Will there be a chance you will be writing a sequel to this? Cause I would like to see what comes next

השומרים הרכינו את ראשם בנאמנות לפני שעזבו בשורה עורפית.

Comment posted by Luneth spark deleted Oct 27th, 2014

Hackney hmm? They've had some recent flares on my radar...

Cadence definitely had herself some fun through her hypnosis book. What I think was very interesting was Wind Wing and his part in all of this. It was certainly an unexpected addition.

Having the book read itself out as the actions took place was also really neat. Made for a sort of internal narration for Cadence as she engaged in her manipulative actions.

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