• Member Since 29th Nov, 2012
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flecdorbee


This is the part where I try to sound deep and brooding. Is it working? Damn.

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Everybody wants something. For some, its happiness. I'm not so hedonistic. For some others, its a sense of pride and hard work. My hands are uncalloused and pale. I just wanted to get off this ride before my turn was up. Turns out, the alternative to life on Earth is an eternity among technicolor equines in a pastel world. Or at least, that's what it was for me.

Cover art was done by my good friend Uki. He did it for $3.50. Uki is not the Loch Ness Monster.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

I'm a little confused but it's good.

I see you finally got it done. I would like some credit for pre-reading, but... Meh, i'll live. good start, at any rate.

Nice. Kinda short but nice.

Cover art was done by my good friend Uki. He did it for $3.50. Uki is not the Loch Ness Monster.

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On a side note, the story seems interesting, however to be honest, the chapters are rather short and it seems a little jumpy in progression. All in all, not my cup of tea but good luck with your story and good luck getting rid of the Loch Ness Monster now that you gave it tree fiddy.

When's the next chapter coming out

This is a little confusing, but seems interesting.

This was confusing.

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