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Rarity works hard for her art, as generous as can be. But with no recognition nor appreciation her heart is very far from free.

She met her challenge with her scissors,

Cut the fabric with her shears,

Soon enough shed be known forever

her name the one of fears.

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Comments ( 25 )

This should be interpreted as a spin off of cupcakes a sort of variation if you wil , yes I know they are everywhere and all but I wanted to try my hand at one. But try and remember This is NOT about Pinkamina even tho she IS a key player in this story:pinkiecrazy:
This fic is about one of the crazier ponies out there:facehoof: no not twilight or fluttershy...
or rainbow....
its about miss rarity, :raritywink:
shes fun to write into madness because like pinkie it feels very natural for them to be crazy.:unsuresweetie:

but please enjoy the story as you like, I simply added the cupcakes element for back story purposes. to be honest cupcakes had no sense of reason but was enjoyable just the same I simply wanted to add my own take on the infamous tale.

reviews are welcome as are flames, they make me laugh as I roast innocent ponies alive with the fire >;3 Flaming makes me more brutal to the characters:pinkiecrazy:

Reminds me of Rarity's New Dress for some reason :pinkiegasp:

:pinkiecrazy: Oh yes....Oh yes thats where Fluer went :3>>387710

You need an editor to give this a quick pass.

Or that's what I would say if I thought this was more than an elaborate troll fic. it is cleverly crafted but come on, you can admit it. It's patently clear. No need to be ashamed. There are many proud trolls who make well-loved fics that are completely off the wall.

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I thank you and for stories I just want to have fun with I just write like mad and then look at my horrifying grammar later and then..:facehoof: ensues. might I ask what a troll fic is?:moustache:

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Ahhhh, I see. i have a somewhat similar process, though a lot gets handled by the use of a word processor. I don't know about free ones; I used Microsoft Works. It handles my spell checking and better versions than I have do grammar as well.

Troll fics are non-serious stories written to elicit a strong reaction, typically outrage, disgust or horror, simply for the joy of the author who enjoys making people feel that kind of distress.

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Oh yes then I write nothing but troll fics.. I only have 2 non troll fics XD

Thankyou for saying it was clever and elaborate <3 I try and give some story elements but this was meant as part of my creepy pasta collection, I wanna see psycho Rarity fan art soon >;3

this reminds me of my first attempt at a story on this, it was called dress time, it was about rarity going insane after her cat was killed by something and pinkie was going crazy for cupcakes, i had only posted 2 chapters, spike was murdered and his insides were givin to pinkamina, sweetie belle had gotten away, i was so proud of it but when all the comments but one said you monster and stuff like that i couldnt help but sulk and delete the story,:pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy:

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RE POST IT
DO IT!!!

Do my method, When I posted another story on fanfic depicting a tyrant from hell celestia I was harrased by someone who thought a fancy vocabulary was intimidating... anywho the flames instead of making me upset made me determined.. I recall thinking. 'Oh so THATS HOW ITS GONNA BE?,She hates it now?! well then I should give her a reason to really hate it.' If anything flames make me more malicious, the teen rating turns to mature and instead of simple exile like was planned....Celestia lets the guards do 'things' to Luna and slaughters her like a pig...It makes me 200% more evil.:pinkiecrazy:

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Ahhh, creepypasta! One of my friends loves that. He likes to hit me with it and I am always endlessly amused.

Psycho-Rarity is well handled by Jay in his Little Miss Rarity Tumblr. I watch his regular art but he mentions it now and then.

I'm really, really bad at doing creepy/gory stuff. I recognize that and stay out of the way of people with actual talent, like you. I stick to what I know: romantic comedies, interpersonal drama and sociopolitical commentary.

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i guess i could give it another try but ill tweak it a bit :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy:

btw i didnt find any errors in your story =)

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<3 read my other stories...Im a horror fiend...:scootangel:

I released a fluttershy one too as well as rainbow crash which has a bit of the twilight one in it:twilightangry2:

I actually read little miss rarity, I love the art work its where I got the cover art pic for this. it fit it nicely..

'well if it isent captian who wont give me a fucking brush'
XD

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Thats the ticket!!! be bold, be crazy!!!:pinkiecrazy: remember even if its flames they still see it and its burned into their memory FOREVER especially if you write on a cupcakes level <3 or better still sweet apple acres masacre...that causes nightmares :heart:

and thankyou for the nice comment

388013
i skimmed through S.A.M. and it was horrifingly wierd
i shall start right away :pinkiecrazy:

Eh... I don't get why you're posting this when it's already been done to death (LOL pun! :pinkiecrazy:) by so many other authors. There's dozens of interpolations of Cupcakes out there. Why is this one supposed to be special?

Not to mention that it seems so choppy. It's not just the grammar, but the total fact that it violates the "show, don't tell" rule everywhere. I'm mild on dark stuff to begin with, but this story just seems boring. Why read this story when you can just look up the images of scary Rarity elsewhere?

I know it had, I did it meerly for my own entertainment. also a scarry rarity image is not too simple to find shes not Pinkie silly lil fox...:trollestia:

Plus I am making a mane six creepypasta collection for my own amusement..:moustache:

388013
it is complete, justneed to wait for submission to approve :pinkiecrazy:

Ooooh, Rarity teaming up with Pinkie. The joy shall never end now:pinkiecrazy: Also, Rarity is officially a badass for stomping out Fluer

The picture... of... LMR... and you said 'miss Rarity'... lol.

I love it! Rarity and Pinkamina, partners in crime! I am excited for the next chapter. :pinkiecrazy: :raritywink:

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This trollfic seems to have ben loved XDD I wrote this on a whim so now...Its time to take it from its current state to pure brutality.
also....

prepare for trouble and make it double!
this will now be officially in the end is nigh durring its grand and depraved rewrite.

it has to hit much more scary before it can qualify for that story series, a little magic and a Dash of madness:pinkiecrazy:

for thoose who do not get the above joke please read nightdreams and daymares (complete)and stir of echoes( ch2 in works)

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