The lack of muffins on your face is disappointing.
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Twilight Sparkle has a secret. She has a insane love for chocolate. And when her favorite brand is all sold out at the store, Twilight is on a journey to hunt down the last pony to buy one. She also kinda goes nuts.
Note that this was one of my earlier stories. The rest of them were pretty terrible, so I removed them from Fimfiction. The only reason this is still up is because it has mostly positive feedback. So anyway, this is not my best work. You have been warned...
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This was very strange.
I LOVED IT!
Very entertaining.
I also love chocolate (:
-Mr. Discord
Great story.
Though, that last word would be stat.
The one you used refrences crap.
4219431 Oops, typo! Thanks for catching that!
I don't care.
4219497 Brian!What did I tell you?!
4219499 about what?
4219510 about being stupid!Have I not told you before to not be mean?"I don't care."
DONT CARE ABOUT WHAT?!
4219520 I think WhatYouDidWRONG was responding to the title.
4219523 no, he's like that.He responds to something , and his comment makes no sense.He does it for confusion.
4219523 sorry that he chose your story to bother.
4219570 Ah, either way, I hope he enjoyed the story.
4219576 he probably did, but he never admits it.
If I were Shining Armor and/or Cadence then I would talk some sense into her or else.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzeK9Ts_7EE
4220026 Cadence was probably going to, but Twilight ran away before she could say anything else. This is also a world with candy colored ponies.
It would be even funnier if she screams "Chocolate!!!!"
4220053 Yeah! Just saw the video. Laughed so hard
. I'll try to incorporate that somewhere.
Ah...I was eating my favorite chocolate when I stumbled upon this story... sufficient to say, you have my like because I could pretty well relate to Twi going crazy about not being able to get her favorite anymore
Waiting for updates!
This was kinda meant to be bad okay?
She can't arrest her little brother like that!!!!
4225026 Well, she just did.
A minuet is a type of musical composition, rel8ted to the waltz. A minute is a unit of time. I get the feeling that the latter was meant, not the former near the 8eginning of the chapter.
~Vriska Serket
Yay for chocolate
4225143 Ummm...could you point out where that was...?
4225143 never mind-found it!
Wow, more than one even.
Oh no, it's like Epic Derp Time all over again!
How much time did you put into writing this?
4786657 This is not meant to be taken seriously... at all. Besides, you can see in the description that it's definitely not my best work. *hides behind chair*
If only twilight did this to rarity, that would have been so funny.
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=SDVWr93Z9Yc]
i am dissapointed at the lack of... humans?