A Day In The Life of A Kicker foal

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Life as a filly aint easy. The world is so big, and there's some scary stuff out there. But that's okay, cause Bunny's a Kicker, and Kickers are tough! She just hopes that mean old doctor doesn't have any more shots to give her.

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Nexidava

Nexidava #1 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · ·

*sigh*

I wrote 400 words telling you how much I hate you and this story, Ebony. Four hundred. I want nothing more than to post them here, but I won't.

At this point, I can only conclude that you are either a child, mentally disabled, or both. So now, more than my considerable hate, you have my pity.

I'm sorry for the things I've said in the past - it's not like they seem to have done much good. I'm going to do the smart thing I should have done months ago, and block you. With luck, hopefully I'll never see you or your stories again.

Goodbye.

Ebony Gryphon

Ebony Gryphon #2 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · ·

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Thank you for your passion, and God bless.

Lord Solaris Pentecost

Lord Solaris Pentecost #3 · Apr 11th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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I think you've got the right opinion. Personally, I'm leaning toward Ebony being an early teenager (13 to 16ish). Probably lives in central USA, military in the family I'd guess as well (Judging by common themes). If he isn't, you're right in saying there's probably some serious problems here.

@Ebony, if you still go to school, you should see if there's a councilor on staff, tell him/her that people think you may have issues. Sort this sort of thing out before you end up going postal.

@ Articulator, sorry for dragging you back here.

Nexidava

Nexidava #4 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · ·

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Not at all. I should be thanking you - it is extremely gratifying and vindicating to see someone with a similar opinion.

I agree with your recommendations wholeheartedly.

To add to your estimation, the biblical naming patterns suggest Jewish or Christian family tradition. I'd assume Christian, based on geography, but I believe I recall on the odd occasion, Yiddish has come up. So, if Christian, potentially with a more Jewish slant than is common.

The process by which he deflects criticism is closer to American-Christian patterns in its simplicity, from my experience, but it could go either way.

Nexidava

Nexidava #5 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · ·

~~Double post~~

Comment posted by Ebony Gryphon deleted Apr 11th, 2014

Ebony Gryphon

Ebony Gryphon #7 · Apr 11th, 2014 · 2 · ·

You know what? Say whatever you want. Think whatever you want. This story was done to get me through a rough time, and the day it was posted was the same day my friend got the greatest news one can get. This was done to help me through what may very well been the loss of a friend, and after an edit, is going back in celebration and honor of the day he came back home.

Like I said, not out of the woods... so folks, keep him and all those in remission, and those who still battle the disease, in your prayers.

Honeytongue

Honeytongue #8 · Nov 30th, 2014 · · ·

Dang! If a diamond dog can be a doctor in this universe, than surely there is room for an anthropomorphic wolf psychologist, right? Btw, if you know whom I'm talking about, you get a moustache.

Also, Twilight Sparkle, a major? And Fluttershy being all 'mama-bear' on her?

Ebony Gryphon

Ebony Gryphon #9 · Nov 30th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Indeed I do. You of course speak of our fandoms illustrious Dr. Wolf, who in fact is writing stories now.

And Fluttershy's... animosity is explained here
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203956/to-end-the-tyrant-selene
which is something of a darker story as opposed to this slice of life one

And is a indirect sequel to
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/152184/sisu
Which is something more of a comedy involving Shadow Kicker and is blood stained with the cheerful butchering of ye olde time bible speak.

I'm also having a comic in this au if you're interested
http://guywhodoesdraws.deviantart.com/
Only base sketches and some one shots though. And now I shall curl up in a corner of my room, shaking in terror of Chengar who will no doubt soon burst into my room, cudgel in hand, and gleefully smash my fingers for the act of bad grammar in the first degree

Honeytongue