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Dreams and Deception

When a bewitchment goes awry, how will the mane 5 of the past defeat Nightmare Moon when the 6th element has learned Celestia's true colours? This is the story of how one pony's memories can show the true story of things that have happened, and how the power of the truth will win out in the end.

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aquilerafroot

aquilerafroot #1 · Apr 4th, 2012 · · · Entry One: A Botched Bewitchment ·

Well I think Spike was a bit too rude, and too careless, and too impatient, especially if he has grown up. He's not that rude in the episodes if I'm not mistaken

A Sassy Vulture

A Sassy Vulture #2 · Apr 4th, 2012 · · · Entry One: A Botched Bewitchment ·

405490 Yeah I thought that part was a little OOC for Spike, but I just wanted to be finished with the first chapter and not spend too much time on it.

Thanks for the feedback :D