The Life of a Wanted Changeling (Comment Driven Story)

by Down with Chrysalis

(FIXED) Episode 45: ...Well You Won't Get One.

Bugze pauses, seeing the filly, before looking back and forth between her and the mane six,

You pause in absolute shock. You look at the downed ponies and then you look at the dark unicorn filly (who adorably has The Inventory warped around her body). You continue to look back and forth between them, confused at what to think. The voice in your head screams,

No you fool! It's obviously just an illusion conjured up by the purple one in a pathetic attempt to save their own worthless lives! FINISH THEM!!!

However, you doubt that's true for three reasons.

1. Twilight never saw Nightshade before.

2. Twilight's horn isn't glowing all magic-like, so she isn't casting any spells.

3. Twilight is unconscious (you did just blast her point-blank with a charged-up rage-fueled stun spell to the face after all...)

But, finally the realization hits you.

It's her... She's alive... Nightshade's really alive!

You smile in happiness and tears of joy start to stream down your face.

The magic dissapates and you think you can hear a tiny hiss of disappointment. You look down at Nightshade to meet her gaze, her eyes filled with anger, anxiousness, and exasperation, but not a single trace of fear. You gently float back down to the ground and stare at Nightshade. Not another second goes by before you wrap her up in a huge hug, not letting go. Nightshade looks at you and whispers to you in a worried tone.
"You...were a monster..." she murmurs. Your gaze softens and you can feel tears well up as the filly returns your tight, protective hug.
"I miss my daddy"
And suddenly there's an explosion in your heart. All traces of fear, doubt, anger, and confusion are blasted away from your soul and replaced with nothing but joy and...
"!" Your eyes widen and you clench your chest as a painful yet pleasant sensation settles in your heart.
Love.

See your daughter. The ball of raging death begins to disappear and you swear you hear a tiny hiss of failure. You decide to look into the whole 'evil voice in my head later', because right now all you want to do is see your daughter. You begin to descend to the ground and your glowing orange eyes begin to disappear as well. When you look into Nightshade's gaze, you see that her eyes are filled with anger (you flinched at how much anger such a young filly like her has), anxiousness, worry, and exasperation, but what surprises you is that she doesn't have a single trace of fear in her eyes.

She's not scared of me! You think in shock, But... I must look like a monster to her...to all of them. You think in sadness as you look at the downed ponies, their looks of terror being etched into your mind.

You sigh in shame as you finally reach the ground, your midnight colored smoke (which, for some reason, you want to call it the "Nightmare Cloak") disappears and your back to your old buggy self. Though somehow your hood manage to stay on the entire time you went loco.

Right before she can react, you scoop her into the largest hug thought possible, whispering about how upset you were into her ear.

But, not a second goes by before you scoop Nightshade into the largest hug thought possible and you begin to rapidly say to her stuff like,

"Are you okay" and "Where have you been?"

Nightshade looks at you and whispers in a worried tone,

"You... were a monster..." Your gaze softens and you begin to frown in shame as you can feel more tears well up, but the filly returns your tight, protective hug.

"I miss my daddy."

Suddenly there's an explosion in your heart. All traces of fear, doubt, anger, and confusion are blasted away from your soul and replaced with nothing but joy and...

"!"

Your eyes widen and you clutch your chest as a painful yet pleasant sensation settles in your heart. Nightshade looks at you worried and asks,

"Are you okay daddy?"

Your chest starts to hurt more when Nightshade ask you that. It is then you realize what is causing you pain...

Love.

Is this what it feels to be loved? I mean, sure, changelings get love by tricking ponies into thinking that we're their loved ones, but is this how it feels to be loved without trickery?You think to yourself in confusion. After the sensation passes, you look at Nightshade and ask a question that has been bugging (pun intended) you for awhile, and that is...

"Ni- Nightshade? Y- you're alive? How? I saw you get crushed."

"Ni- Nightshade? Y- you're alive? How? I saw you get crushed."

Nightshade suddenly looks really nervous and she says,

"Wellyouseedaddytherewasthisicecreamshopjustalittleawayfromthestage. Ithadaboardoutsidethatread 'All You Can Eat Ice Cream for 9 Bits!' andIwashungrysoIthought 'Hey why not.' SoItookmybedTheInventoryandwenttotheicecreamshop (don'tworryDaddyIhidmywingsandarmorusingmybed). Istayedthereeatingseveraltubsoficecream (andtheyactuallydidletmeeatallIwant! UnlikethatOliveGrottowhichbtwwastoosaltyanyway) untilIheardthisscarynoisecomingfromoutside. IwouldhavedonesomethingbutIsuddenlygotmassivebrainfreezefromalltheicecream. Andwell... you know what happened after that. OhandIusedupthelastofourbits..." She says with a sheepish grin. (*)

You look at her in shock. You only caught 'All You Can Eat Ice Cream for 9 Bits!', but that was enough for you to piece together what happened and you think,

I don't know if I should be surprised that she went off on her own without telling me or at the fact that her huge appetite saved her.

You just sigh and hug Nightshade again. You close your eyes and think,

This moment is perfect. Nothing can ruin th-

INCOMING URSA MAJOR!!! (Probably NOT happy at the fact that you beat up her baby)

*ROAR!!!*

Your eyes widen in shock and you look in front of you and you see...

A very, very not happy Ursa Major.

....

Buck you, Lady Luck..

What do you do?

Author's Note:

Hey Hive Mind, DWC here.

(*) Translation: "Well... you see daddy, there was this ice cream shop just a little away from the stage. It had a board outside that read 'All You Can Eat Ice Cream for 9 Bits!' and I was hungry, so I thought 'Hey why not.' So I took my bed, The Inventory, and went to the ice cream shop (don't worry Daddy, I hid my wings and armor using my bed). I stayed there eating several tubs of ice cream (and they actually did let me eat all I want! Unlike that 'Olive Grotto' which, btw, was too salty anyway) until I heard this scary noise coming from outside. I would have done something, but I suddenly got massive brain freeze from all the ice cream. And well... you know what happened after that. Oh, and I used up the last of our bits..."

Kersey475 plant some c4 near the doors because *looks behind to see a hoard of grimdarks still chasing hime* WE HAVE COMPANY!. I'm gonna slow them down real quick *takes out the Heavy's mini gun and starts to fire at the grimdarks* TAKE THIS YOU LITTLE BABYS RAGAHAHHAHAHAH

forevertheDoctor, I finally found out what episode you guys are in, your in...oh no. Your in the "Doomsday" episode! Don't tell the Doctor wants gonna happen, but feel free to blast as many Daleks that you want to.

Yesterdays question answer is...

Also, reaction to this chapter. First I thought of:

http://youtu.be/0X9NFknjTRE

'And then I was like...

Image: http://somofos.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/20154993.jpg

And at the very end I was all:

http://youtu.be/Jpgy21r_dRE'

I was laughing the whole time at how many references you made. So thank you Erised the ink-moth for the answer.

Today's question is...

If you were a all powerful god or goddess of chaos in Equstria, what would be the first thing you would do?

Have fun and let the chaos be with you.

Comments

[ramseymac]

You don't seem to be able to summon the massive amounts of dark magic that you were before leaving both you and all the ponies vulnerable to attack, but the power you gained from love has boosted your magic greatly, level with the hate magic, and allows you to use the powerful move: return
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If I were a god?
Again, I'd get tackled by the royal guard.

[Erised the ink-moth]

Oh, would you look at that? A giant star-patterned bear the size of a skyscraper...
*serious face* There is only one thing that can defeat a giant monster... an equally giant monster! (Psst, do we have one of those? Maybe bring back Smaug for a giant monster battle? Spike turning giant? Bugzy going super saiyan on Nightshade's love?)

Hmm... if I were a god in Equestria?
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[Novi]

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The WABBAJACK!

[you that read wrong]

looking at that ursa major you reilise the only solution to your problem: dubstep. your not a very smart changeling are you?

[Dream Seeker]

You grab Nightshade and RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!

[forevertheDoctor]

You look up at the Ursa Major and gulp. I mean look at that, the thing is bloody massive! You decide that no more innocent creatures will be harmed and you try to reason with the beast.

"Um...you see...I didn't mean to harm your cub...but he DID attack Ponyville and he nearly crushed my daughter! You need to control your cub, ma'am!"

If I was a goddess of chaos in Equestria? Ehehehehe...CROSSOVERS. CROSSOVERS EVERYWHERE.

[forevertheDoctor]

(Thinking to self) Doomsday? That's...(gasp) YES! Haha! ROSE FINALLY LEAVES! YEEEEEEEAAAH! Oh crap, is Rose even traveling with us? I haven't seen her...oh well, either way she's GONE.
(Thoughts interupted by the Doctor)
"Well, we're here...Earth."
(Jumps out the TARDIS)
"Thanks Doctor, your secret is safe."
(The Doctor grabs my shoulder and I'm blushing and holding back a fangirl screech because he's touching me)
"EXTERMINATE"
(Doctor and I look at eachother, our eyes wide. I break from his grip and start shooting Daleks)
"DOCTOR! WAKE MAGUS UP, I'M GONNA NEED SOME BACKUP!"

[Baraka Obama]

Proceed to magically strain yourself and teleport everybody you knocked out including you and nightshade back to town before going to distract it away from said town

[Fireheart 1945]

Not answering the 'god' question. Because reasons.

As for the story; Quickly take a stance, shout "URRRRRRRRAAAAAAA!" (Russian battle cry) and charge Ursa.

[Kersey475]

Since we want this fanfic to last all the way to Season 4, we can't have Bugze being an overpowered Mary Sue so he should NOT have any control of his powers yet (for now, the power only appears in response to Nightshade in danger) so we need to find a different way to deal with the Ursa Major...

Fluttershy appears and does something (I'm leaving this loose for the author and the Hive Mind since after her moment in Episode 43:

The yellow pegasus's recoils a little in shock and her glare softens, but you just run off into the forest in heartbroken despair.

and the fact that she wasn't with the other five during their brief fight with enraged Hooded Offender, she needs to appear and do SOMETHING. Maybe calming the Ursa Major or interacting with her friends or Bugze or Nightshade)

You (and Nightshade in The Inventory) teleport away... into another tight spot

Oh, and the next time you see a wanted poster, animal cruelty, fraud, and assaulting the Elements of Harrmony (and maybe "dining-and-dashing" if anyone realizes they were at the "Olive Grotto") should be added to the charges

If I were a god-like being in Equestria, I'd do what any fan would do... SHIP EVERYONE!!!

Okay DWC, I planted a whole bunch of C4 and claymores at the door. We're good to go!

[MagusBlack]

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*Mechanically starts shooting and knocking down daleks*
*Oddly they don't even seem to notice Magus*
*looking closely it almost seems like there is an aura of dark grey surrounding Magus*

[RainbowDashRules]

"*Gulp* ummmmm, you see.......i'm sorry about what happened buuuuuuttttt........LOOK A DISTRACTION!!!!!"

You point to a random place away from you, nightshade and the injured mane six minus one and while the stupid bear is distracted you run towards the mane six - minus one- pass them nightshade and whisper/yell....

"look i doubt that will work for long, im sorry i attacked you, i don't know what the hay came over me but please take my daughter to safety" you beg.

"Why the buck-" applejack begins but you cut her off.
You take off your hood and look at them with pleading eyes.
"Please, im begging you. if i survive this i'll turn myself in just please"
Applejack just stares at you, her eyes hardening until she sees the worry and honesty in your eyes. she sighs.
"you better survive this" AJ replies. eyes softening "not only for your daughter, but so i can kick your changeling flank understood?"
Before you can answer you hear an angry roar behind you.
"RUN!" you scream. after they run away you turn to face the major.
"Luna help me" you sqeek

[RainbowDashRules]

to answer your question i'd simply
SEND FANS FROM OUR WORLD ANS ANIME/CARTON CHARACTERS TO EQUESTRIA FOR AWSOME HIE STORIES AND CROSSOVERS!!!!!

[forevertheDoctor]

4619537 "Oh my god....what's happening? Doctor, do you know what's happening? Because I don't."

[Minds Eye]

Quick! Pantomime that her cub almost killed yours!

If I were a god of chaos in Equestria, I would set up human sized "You must be this tall to..." signs at shops, restaurants, bowling alleys, movie theaters, and everything else all across the land.

[Dream Seeker]

If I were a god... I would create seagulls and train them to poop on ponies' heads, then I would help the Changelings and ponies ally together and defeat the seagulls. (All without them knowing my identity, of course. That way, I can be the secret superhero and the secret super-villain at the same time!)