[FIXED] Episode 23: Following The Six Crazy Mares (Part 1)
c) Follow the group and then help with the dragon
Sea. LOL C.
C) You don't want to risk blowing your cover in front of ALL SIX ELEMENTS OF HARMONY!
C. Applejack would just pick you out immediately for option A, and B stands for barbecue in which you are the main course. So go with C.
I vote Option C.
You decide that the best option to help would be to follow them at a safe distance, and by a safe distance you mean AS FAR AWAY AS POSSIBLE FROM THEM. You considered going with them, but then you remembered that Applejack could be one of the ponies going with the pegasus so you aren't going to take that chance. You also considered going against the dragon by yourself, but then you remembered that B stands for Barbecue in which you are the main course, and you don't feel like getting eaten by a dragon today. You wait until the yellow pegasus is far away enough from you, then you follow her into Ponyville.
30 MINUTES LATER
You followed the pegasus all the way to the center of town. She went into a tree house of some kind, so you decided that it would be best for you to hide out in a tree near by. You quickly climb up a tree near the tree house and wait for her to come back out. It's a couple minutes later when she comes out with five other mares… ALL OF THEM FROM THE WEDDING THAT KICKED YOUR FLANK! You begin to freak-out over the fact that every mare knows that you are in the area, and the fact that they all hate you for doing something mean to them. You begin to calm down when you realize that they aren't heading your way. Instead they all get into a straight line, like guards would do when their commanding officer was inspecting them, and Twilight began to walk back and forth from them and she began to give out instructions.
You hear bits and pieces of what Twilight is telling them, and from what you can hear apparently Twilight has a map planed out showing the best way up the mountain. Twilight says something you can't hear that causes the yellow pegasus to start to shiver like crazy. Poor girl, must be terrified about what ever Twilight said, you think to yourself in sympathy. Rainbow then says something to Applejack, which causes Rarity to...take out a scarf and puts it on?
You see Twilight pull out the map, and you see the yellow pegasus walk over to her. You can't hear exactly what they’re saying. It looks like the pegasus is trying to say something to Twilight, but it looks like Twilight's too busy reading the map to listen. The yellow pegasus suddenly looks really happy and she starts to...leave. Twilight suddenly notices this and she says something to the pegasus. You lose interest after that and decide to pass the time by…
Seeing how you are about to go up against a DRAGON you also decide to read "Kung-Fu For Dummies" and learn either:
"Chain Punch"
OR
"No Shadow Kick"
Reading your 'Kung-Fu For Dummies' book, you know since you’re going against a stinking DRAGON, you think it would be a good idea to know some form of attack to live a little bit longer. You think about it so that you can take it out of The Inventory, and you begin to look though the list of moves you could learn. One move catches your eye, its called the 'No Shadow Kick" heres how it looks like.
A couple of minutes later you memorize all the steps to do the move, and you hopefully think that you got it down pat. Hopefully, a dragon will feel this, or at the very least be distracted by it long enough so that it won't eat me.You think to yourself in both terror and hope.
Learned 'No Shadow Kick'
You turned back to the ponies to see...them running off with the yellow pegasus being dragged away with them. They know that that's technically kidnapping...right?you think to yourself in confusion. You realize that they are getting away from you, so you decide that the fastest way to catch up with them would be too…
remambering the multiple stealth games youve played (hitmare a ponys creed etc.) you use you amazing free running skills to tail them thrugh the trees
Try doing stealth free running skills, like those stealth games you played (Hitmare, Pony's Creed, etc.). You take a deep breath and begin to run across the buildings...without messing up at all. You would have thought of how surprisingly good you are at this, but you decide that the best thing to do would be to focus on making the jumps and not getting seen by any of the ponies down below.
24 MINUTES LATER
You finally manage to catch up with the six mares after alot of tree jumping. You somehow manage to jump stealthy into a tree near where the six mares stopped at. But, as soon as you got there you hear a deep loud snore coming from the top of the mountain. You would have wondered why the dragon was sleeping, if it weren't for the fact that the yellow pegasus from before flipped over like a goat that just fainted and was frozen in fear.
From what you can see, Applejack will be taking the map and the yellow pegasus on a different path up the mountain, and Twilight, Rainbow, Rarity, and Pinkie will be taking the original path up the mountain.Oh no, they’re splitting up. Should I follow the large group of ponies where there would be a higher chance of me getting caught, or should I follow Applejack and the yellow pegasus where the chance of getting caught is lower but then there's Applejack and her changeling sensing thing I have to worry about. You make up your mind and decide to follow…
Who should you follow?
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The first group would undoubtedly mean a much higher chance of getting destroyed if you got caught, but Applejack can uncover your disguise. Unless Twilight becomes suspicious and scans you, the larger group would mean fewer chances of being discovered.
Small group. If anything happens to Fluttershy, Applejack might not be able to reach her in time due to her lack of wings or magic. Bonus if your selfless heroism makes AJ like you.
PS. You keep writing "flake" instead of flank".
Follow the small group.
Remember, you know Kung-fu now, Even if Applejack catches you, you can take care of her (I hope)
As for funniest part of the fic
"LOOK A DISTRACTION!"
4467236 OH FOR THE LOVE OF
...*sigh*
thanks for telling me this, I really need to start looking over my writing before I publish it. Thanks for telling me
To the writer: this is an amazing story I can't stop reading it I love it all but I have noticed that alot of my comments are not making it into the story why is that so?
Go with Apple and Flutters, the path is longer and they might need your help along the way. Especially with Fluttershy K.O.ed like she is.
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It's cool. Trust me, I've made worse errors before.
Deciding to use logic and deduction like your hero, Sherclop Holmes (note to self, read other Sherclop books in your free time), you reason that going with the larger group of four mares would be downright suicidal. Also, you deduce that the yellow pegasus is definitely as scared as you are (if not more so which you didn't even think was possible) and could possibly be a future help.
You follow the smaller group and help them in subtle (and often painful (to you)) ways,
Funniest moment: Rarity the meat shield!
Thank you for planning to use my idea!
In case the rest of you are wondering what it is:
As the dragon is about to attack the downed Mane 5, you charge at the dragon yelling in the Royal Canterlot Voice "I'M THE DISTRACTION!!!". Distracted by your sudden verbal assault, you manage to hit the stunned dragon in the eye with No Shadow Kick. While this does allow the ponies to get to a safe distance, the half-blinded dragon becomes enraged and violently and repeatedly smashes you causing you to revert to changeling form. This does have the benefit of inspiring Fluttershy to stare down and scold the dragon like in the episode.
You then try to drag your smashed buggy self away, only to run right into some orange and blue poles, but you look up and to your horror its Applejack and Rainbow Dash! Fortunately, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and even Rarity come to your aid (the fashionista does acknowledge that you used her as a shield and threw her, but you did help her out with that dress beforehand). Getting the trust of some of the ponies makes ur smashed bones worth it-why is everything going dar-(*faint from injuries*)THUD
NOTE: (If you don't want Bugze to be friends with the Mane 6 yet, then the dragon throws you through the stone wall of the cave where you plummet a long distance (your life flashing before your eyes... Boy, you spent alot of time playing video games and you were TERRIBLE at the whole "evil" thing) and land in the river)
I'd say go with AJ and Flutters, sure you may get found out by the quedrupedal lie detecter, but the catatonic Pegasus might need your help, after all she didn't seem that enthusiastic about KICKING YOUR FLANK during the wedding.
Funniest part: Rarishield baby! Not only that but if you buy one now you get the extras of this seasons fashion line, accessorise your shield. Go ahead, she won't mind! (much)
And if you prefer the age old proverb of 'the best defence is a good offence' then have no fear! Just throw her horn first at any hostile horsies, satisfaction guaranteed!
. . .
Sweet Celestia I need sleep. . .
Flutters and Applejack
4467511 Oh really, oops sorry, I guess that I just use your next one, if that's okay with you
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Follow aj and fluttershy.
favorite moment: probably the metal gear solid box scene.
4468376 sure
I think the Weeping Pegasus part was hilarious because that was my exact reaction when I first saw a Weeping Angel. I was really terrified, and wished I had a pickaxe with me when I had to go to bed and turn out the lights. But of course that didn't happen (I have no idea why...) so...
Who needs sleep anyway?
You feel sorry for the yellow pegasus. You decide to risk it with Applejack and follow the small group.
Best moment for me was the changeling singing Smile, Smile, Smile with Cadance. Yes, it was my suggestion so I'm really biased, but come on! Where else in the fandom or the show have you seen a changeling and Cadance dancing together? Only in fanfiction, and only right here.
Go with AJ and Fluttershy.
...Wait a second,
The way this was phrased makes me think that AJ's detection thing only works when a changeling is in disguise. Perhaps it would be a good idea to drop our current disguise because we are not intending to interact with anybody directly and having it on will only set off AJ's changeling sense. It is not like it takes all that long to get a disguise up and running anyway.
The funniest part? A couple of moments actually. The whole sequence of events at the palace before we ran into Candace was great. Also, the time Bugze nearly had a panic attack imagining what would happen if he got caught by the ponies. It actually reminded me of Twilight a little. ( Oh Dear Luna, If you have a scene later on down the road with Twi and Bugze going into some kind Major Panic Spiral because they each keep thinking up worse and worse consequences together, that would hilarious.)
4473447 Sir or madam, you just gave me a wonderfully evil idea MWAHAHAHAHAAH
Its too late, but i would have said disguise as splejack and wait up ahead of the big group, because aj and flutters will obviously take longer.
Royal Canterlot Voice for dummies
I think there are 2 funny parts. When bugze screams at twighlight and she screams back, and when the same thing happens with derpy
ME!
why did he forget the library? He was in it like 17 chapters ago!