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The Life of a Wanted Changeling (Comment Driven Story) - Down with Chrysalis



A you decide story about well a changeling. More info inside.

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Episode 11: Hug Time and First Friend!!!

You remember a certain happy-go-lucky pink pony that planned the wedding reception. Transform into her and dance. Try to make Cadance smile, smile, smile!

You remember a certain happy-go-lucky pink pony that planned the wedding reception. You saw her during one of your "stakeouts" (At least that's what your superiors thought, you actually just went out to watch a movie or play a video game.) Whenever that pony would walk ( and by walking you mean hopping) by you, she would always be smiling and giving the city folk a good laugh. Which is pretty good, considering the entire cities population is a bunch of snobs. So maybe if you transform into her, then maybe the bride will stop crying.

You use your transform spell, and look over at the mirror on the desk to see that you have successfully transformed into the pink pony. You look over at the bride to see that she is still crying, and when you see that, something snaps inside of you. You suddenly hear this song in your head and...you begin to sing!!!

My name is $#^#%%# (Hello!)
and I am here to say (Please get better'?)
I'm gonna make you smile
and I will brighten up your day

The bride stops crying and looks up at you shocked. You start to dance around her, hopefully to make her smile.

It doesn't matter now (Smile please?)
if you are sad or blue (That's it!)
'cause cheering you up is just
what I'm gonna do

The bride starts to get a huge smile on her face, and for some reason, that makes you smile too.

'Cause I want to make you smile, smile, smile (Yes I do)
it fills my heart with sunshine all the while (Yes it does)
'cause all I really need's a smile, smile, smile
from you

I like to see you grin (Awesome!)
It would be cool to see you beam (Rock on!)
the corners of your mouth turned up
is what I want to see (Hoof-Bump!)

The bride gives you a hoof-bump, and then she starts to dance with you. Her smile is even bigger then before, and so is yours.

But if you're kind of worried
and your face has made a frown
I'll work real hard and do my best
to turn that sad frown upside down

'Cause I love to make you grin, grin, grin (Yes I do)
busted out from ear to ear, let it begin
just give me a joyful grin, grin, grin
and you fill me with good cheer

It's true, some days are dark and lonely
and maybe you feel sad
but I will be there to show you that it isn't that bad

The music you hear tempo goes down for a little bit, but then it starts to pick up again. The bride starts to laugh when you do a silly little dance, and you can't help but laugh with her.

There's one thing that makes me happy
and makes my whole life worthwhile right now
and that's when I talk to my first real friend and I get to see you smile

The bride looks shocked that you said that, but then she smiles and starts to dance again. You don't know why you said that, but you know that you meant it. She's your first friend... you start to cry tears of joy at that thought.

I really am so happy
your smile fills me with glee
I give a smile, I get a smile
and that's so special to me

'Cause I love to see you beam, beam, beam (Yes I do)
tell me, what more can I say to make you see that I do?
it makes me happy when you beam, beam, beam
yes, it always makes my day

Come on buddy smile, smile, smile!
fill my heart up with sunshine, sunshine
all I really need's a smile, smile, smile
from this happy friend of mine!

Come on buddy smile, smile, smile!
fill my heart up with sunshine, sunshine
all I really need's a smile, smile, smile
from this happy friend of mine!

Yes a perfect gift for me
is a smile as wide as a mile
to make me happy as can be
smile, smile, smile, smile, smile!

Come on and smile!
come on and smile!

And with that the song stops playing and you fall down on your rump. You look in the mirror to see that your transformation fell off when you were singing, but you don't care your to happy that you have a actual friend. You look over to her to see that she is smiling still, you get up and walk over to her. Then you do something unexpected...

Engage hug mode.

Awkward Hug time.

Dude, I know you were part of an invasion to take over equestria and turn every pony into love batteries, but come on! Surely your not going to let an innocent filly cry are you? Give her a (albeit awkward one) hug, even changelings have hearts.:fluttercry:

You hug her. She gasps in surprise, but then you see her wrap her hooves around you. "Thank you, I really needed that." She tells you, still hugging you. A few minutes later your hug ends, and you are seen standing across from the bride. You also tell her thanks for saving you from those guards. "Don't mention it, after all what are friends for." She tells you. Friends, it feels nice having a friend. You think to yourself.

Explain that you don't recall everything that happened at the wedding, but that you don't want to be a bad changeling anymore.
With her help, you may be able to fit in with these ponies.

You tell the bride that you don't recall everything that happened at the wedding, but that you don't want to be a bad changeling anymore. She smiles at you and says "I don't care if you don't remember what happen all that matters is that your alive and that you are going to be good. Not that I thought you were evil in the first place."

Wait, ask if she was the one who gave you the Inventory.

You can't help but ask her if she was the one who gave you The Inventory. She shakes her head and says "I didn't give you that saddle bag, but whoever did must be a very powerful pony. This kind of enchantment takes alot of power to cast." Huh, so there is a powerful pony out there that gave you The Inventory... you don't know if you should be thrilled or terrified about that fact.

The bride gives you a brown pouch and says "That pouch has thirty Bits in it. Consider it my thank you gift for saving me." You are about to give the pouch back when the bride tells you that she won't take no for an answer. She then starts to power-up her magic.

"It's not safe here, you need to go someplace that you can stay that doesn't have any guard portals." She then puts on a "thinking face" probably thinking of a place you can go to. "Ah ha, I got it, I'll see you later Bugze." You are about to ask her why she called you "Bugze" when she then says "Oh, my name is Cadance by the way." After she said that, you see a flash of pink light.

The next thing you know, your in an alleyway. You can see a billboard from were your standing that says "Welcome To Ponyville."
"Huh," you say to yourself, "So that's where Cadance sent me. You decide to check The Inventory since nothing is trying to capture you at the moment.
Strange Armor
'Royal Canterlot Voice For Dummies'
'How to be A Gentle Colt 101'
The entire Sherclop Holmes series, as well as all fifty-six short stories
'Stun Spells and You'
Brown pouch with thirty Bits in it

Nodding to yourself after making sure you have everything, you start to look around. You don't know what you should do or where you should go.

What do you do?

Author's Note:

PLEASE DON'T HATE ME!!!! I saw that comment and I just couldn't resist. I swear it will never happen again...unless you guys/girls/bugs/ponies what me to do it again. Anyway the song, even though it has been edited to make sense. doesn't belong to me. All rights go to The Living Tombstone, he's the one who made the remix. I just so happened to pick since it sounds awesome for my story. Last episodes question is a personnel one, so I will give the answers, yep two again folks. They are

"I think this story will last as long as the writer enjoys writing it and the viewers enjoy viewing it.
Katia mannagan from prequel is still going strong after all.
Personally I enjoy the light hearted comedy and randomness of the this world so far, so I ask: please continue the story for a long time!:applecry:"

And

"As for how long the story will last: In my opinion, the length of the story doesn't really matter that much, just the quality of what's in it. But I hope it continues on for quite some time, I'm really enjoying what's been done so far.
Take this perspective however you like, and never stop doing what you love.
From the depths of your heart and mind, through the infinite web that surrounds and connects us all.
- Erised :twilightsmile:"

It made my day when I saw these two comments guys/girls/bugs/ponies. I thought this story wouldn't make it past episode 4 without it flopping. But, this is just awesome. Thank you chapter_traveler and Erised the ink-moth, just...thank you.

"Ahem, DWC I think that's enough of the snappiness there." All right, All right yeesh everyone's/ling's/pony's a critic, but meant all of that. "Yeah yeah yeah on to today's episodes question is..."

" What is the best brony song?"

"And we mean fan-made songs, not remixes or add-ons. We mean full, took a year to write by yourself, kind of songs. For example "Lost on The Moon." This has been DWC "and me Changeling" giving you a great day..bye.

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