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Solar Flare_28

I'm glad you're alive.


Princess Celestia's vacation was never to the Seapony's realm, it was really just a lie Luna made up to cover up the truth: that Celestia was kidnapped! If Rainbow Dash and her sisters don't find her soon, Equestria may find the truth, or worse, the ponies responsible for this may use Celestia's power to take over Equestria. They may also bring back bad memories for Luna...

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 26 )

Yay!:yay:Finished first chapter!

Good story! :pinkiehappy:
Liked how you decided t shape it in the end. :rainbowkiss:

Awesome story! It's so awesome :rainbowkiss: (get the reference?) how you and Commander Rainstorm help each other out! Ha ha now I get it your usernames are Rainbow Dash's sister's names. :rainbowdetermined2:

:pinkiehappy: love it, please make more chapters :raritywink: :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Solar Flare_28 deleted Apr 11th, 2014

Awesome Solarflare! :pinkiehappy:
The next chapter better be up soon...or else.:trixieshiftright:

Yay, more chapters! I hope I got Discord right...:rainbowderp::twilightsheepish::derpytongue2:

This was also the longest chapter so far, yay!

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?


Um, not in my mind's eye right now...:derpytongue2:

Lol Discord. So sorry for not reviewing on the other chapters but I've been busy keeping up with other stories and I have a bit of writers block for Chapter 7 of my story. Anyways I can't wait to see more of Discord's antics! Keep up the excellent work!


Thanks! I've been trying to make him chaos-ish...:rainbowderp:

Loved it! :pinkiehappy:
I look forward to more.
But can you be more descriptive? :twilightblush:
Sorry, this was kinda short. :twilightsheepish:


Er, I'm not done yet. I said 'so far' in the PM...I think...:facehoof: Anyways, the title is...you know what(no spoilers to others, sorry! I'm a horrible person.:rainbowlaugh:), so I'd have to make that an event in the chapter.:twilightsmile:

BTW to others, as my editor, Commander Rainstorm got a link to the next chapter in a PM. Along with the unpublished view password.:raritywink:

Oooh interesting! I really like this whole sea kingdom setting! Hmm now we have a better idea of who the trio is dealing with but you were right about the more questions being raised part! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:


Thank you! Commander Rainstorm doesn't know about this part yet, since she didn't edit it. That's bad 'cause now she's gonna blackmail me into spoiling the whole story for her!:rainbowlaugh: She does that sometimes, in a somehow nice and polite way. She'll admit to it.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Calls herself the 'polite blackmailer', so stay on her good side...:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::pinkiehappy:

Wait, in the previous chapter... shouldn't Rainbow had won? "Fastest Young Flyer"???
Anywho, AWESOME STORYEEE. :D :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart:

OMG :D :pinkiehappy:

Thus far, its been a good read. I love short stories, and it had such a unique setting. Great job!

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