• Published 29th Apr 2014
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A sunset can't shimmer - DashieReviews



Twilight had came back to Canterlot High to see Sunset Shimmer. The had changed completely. But only on the outside.

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Chapter 2 - At the welcoming

Darkened lifes,
Darkened days,
All ended,
Because of her ways

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It was the night. She was coming. Everyone was excited. Even Sunset Shimmer. They all gathered round the statue, waiting for Twilight to come. It was the big moment.

"She's here... I think"
" How about now?"
"Look!"
"She's here... For reals dude!"

Twilight had arrived, expecting to see Sunset Shimmer in front of her, waiting for her arrival. But she wasn't there, in front of her. And everyone had expected that she would be inside. So they all went inside the school.

" This party is neat, dude!"
" She really outdone herself!"
" This is awesome!"

Everyone looked around the hall, the place was decorated with banners and streamers in bright fluorescent colours. The stage was set up for the band for the night, the floor was a dance floor heaven and there was a food bar to the far right. Twilight couldn't believe what Sunset Shimmer had done for her, she absolutely loved it.

The band got onto the stage and started their one-hour set up session.
" Wow! This is the most amazing party ever!" Twilight said, walking over to the stage to see who was performing for the night. Flash Sentry and his friends were doing a session for even more practice because they had a concert coming up.

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" It's working!" Snails exclaimed, hopping up and down in excitement. Sunset Shimmer, Snips and Snails were hiding behind the portal, waiting for the moment to go. Which was now.
" Go come on! Quick!" Sunset Shimmer said, pushing Snips and Snails into the portal.

Comments ( 2 )

Are you planning to continue this story?:duck::applejackunsure::unsuresweetie::rainbowhuh:

4312714 Dude, he's obviously tabbing out some good ol Djent. 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Drop Q if life m8

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