• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2014
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PhoenixFlame77


There is a world. In all of us. Full of imagination. Our hearts. Our fears. Our wildest dreams. It is called...The Infinity.

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Her parents, and her big sister, were killed in a hot air-balloon ride when she was just a newborn. Ever since then, she's gone from town to town, searching for work, living in poverty.
She has always been fascinated by the world of books and myths.
She still doesn't have her Cutiemark.
Her name is Graphite Star, and she's about to discover that while the prospect may look black, there's always a light that shines through the dark.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 11 )

Graphite star... Writing.

[Reaction to chapter one] I'm already thoroughly interested in the main character! Although, I wonder how you will get along with spike and owlowicious? To the next chapter we go then.

That was by far the queerest element about this job. I now worked, and lived...in a tree. I mean, it felt magical, like a mystical treehouse, but it felt odd. Very odd. Odd suited me. Odd. Odd. Odd. I like that word. It reminds me of Ood. Ood, Ood, Ood, I thought hazily. I grinned and raised myself to my four legs, and yawned again.

oh my celestia, yes!
This story gets a fave. :pinkiehappy:

Really good so far, but Rarity wouldn't be angry and she definitely wouldn't be so disgusted. She might not like the dirt, but she won't be disgusted by Graphite.

dolly1, You are certainly correct. But the element that you're missing is that Graphite Star merely enhanced the look Rarity gave her...a problem that she has. Graphite Star judges herself too quickly. :fluttershysad:

But I will try to improve that chapter! Thank you for reading! :twilightsmile:

Just to let you know you put Christians instead of Hearts Warming Eve. Other then that good start to the story.

Yayy! Three cheers for Aloe!!! :raritywink: Please, please, please update it quicker next time.

Of course, dolly1! :pinkiehappy:
Sorry it took me so long... I've been having HUGE writer's block lately. :derpytongue2:
I'm working on the next chapter right now! :twilightsmile:

This wonderful! I'll continue reading as you do writing. To bad I can't like it again.

Pyriel, if I weren't for you, I wouldn't have this many reads. Thank you SO MUCH for supporting me! You ROCK! :pinkiehappy: I will keep writing and writing until I DROP!

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