Celestia's littler sister has kept a little secret from her for over one thousand years... Tonight is the night she shares a side of herself that Celestia was never sure that she had.
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CelestialBrony
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Oh wow I feel stupid. I was like hey I recognise picture i'm going to read it later.
Gee I can be stupid sometimes 
The two godesses lay there<<<< Spelling error
Cute story though
Very nice use of ambient sounds and music to create the mood. This is touching and does justice for Luna.
420877 exactly what I thought when I read it.
Quite nice :D
i liked the touch of adding the rainfall track; I've seen people link music to set the mood before, but the ambient sound adds to it really well.
liked the fic itself as well; ye olde English feels a bit forced, but other than that it's very enjoyable
when i saw the cover art i was picturing a different scene where celestia is yelling "WAKE THE FUCK UP" for some odd reason
hmmm. how to describe it? ah yes. D'awwwwwwwwwwww
That was so sweet. The music was a nice touch.
421384 Even though that's like, the polar opposite of what I got out of it, that comment made me laugh. Hard.
That would be hilarious.
420848 Buckin' FEATURED, mother bucker!
After only like two hours! HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG /)
i.imgur.com/O0vwp.gif
FAIL! I forgot to add that last image!
There it is. 
That was beautiful encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRjhKX8OgMHbg0f76TGxi25Fjt-OK5a3ZfP-w6TtvP3vZNnAMoH
Manly tears is right. I was doing fine until Celly's poem
Favorited.
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That poem was the most rushed part of the story, actually. 
I wanted to get that posted SO bad, so I wrote it in like 3 minutes. 
It seems the words that I write on a spur of inspiration work best. Thanks for confirming that 
This is really something that I thought the show could have gone into more; the relationship between the returned Luna and Celestia. It was actually the inspiration for my own story, though I feel like that kinda gets lost in everything else that happens in it. ^^;
I thought you did a beautiful job on this; I love the personifications of the Princesses, and you did a fantastic job of making me feel Luna's sadness and the love the two sisters have for each other. Your poetry is beautiful- I'll admit that I have a soft spot for poetry, so having Luna and Celestia both write and recite was amazing for me.
A wonderful story all the way around; I look forward to seeing more of your work. ^_^
~D4ft
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DAMN RIGHT THANK YOU! IM OVERREACTING BECAUSE I FINISHED THE NEW EPISODE LIKE 20 SECONDS AGO AND IM PUMPED 'D;FLGKETHJI3U94GJFDR
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
422726 I told you not to rush that poem.
But even though you rushed it the poem came out great.
422726 And woot new episode
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Ah, but don't you see? I only do well when I rush... Like "When nopony's Looking..." I only had to edit one mistake, and that was after it got featured. Anyway, most of my PMs are about Celestia's poem. 
Gotta write something else...
422886 Go write
And i'm going skating soon so I won't be back for a couple of hours. See you later 
I has a sadness nao. A cute sadness.
beautiful
just beautiful
also dat sound effect, i'm bookmarking it. i love the rain almost as much as i love the night. it calms me. i like the sound effect.
The rainy mood and the elfin lied set the tone perfectly
That was beautifull[/bcan you like write like lunas diary or lunas poems that were in the book she was reding from
u made me cry when celestia told luna her poem.
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I cried when I wrote it... Just a little... 
479435 aww thats how you know iits true frm da
And I quote
: "Aww, that was such a sweet story."
Thanks for sharing.
A little sad, but heartwarming all the same.
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'Tis what I go for.
D'awww, sweet story <3
Now, that's the Celestia I like!
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I personally think Celly doesn't get enough love from this fandom. 
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I think it´s because her character is not well developed. We don´t really see, in the show, the stuff she does to keep things in order. What she really is like.
All we got was that she lost a fight that wasn´t really a fair one... It was like giving Sauron the Ring and expecting Aragorn to defeat him.
But I guess that will chage in Season 3.
420857 YOUR AVATAR GAVE MY DIABETUS CANCER!
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=3
Just got around to reading it... sorry about that...
Really good idea, and nicely written. I loved it!
784533 Oh my god can you PLEASE give me a link to that avatar??!?!
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Thank you... It got featured for like two hours, you know. 
Trying hella hard to pump out another story. It's been way too long.
Gorgeous.
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Stop it... You're making me want to write again. 
(Thank you...)
1616575 MOAR STORIES!!!!
1616582 Trying... lol
This had a good start but it started to flounder a little when it came to the interaction between the two. However the poem by Celestia at the end more than made up for it. It explored a thought that I've only seen in a few stories, that Luna is the only one that Celestia will always have.
2441618 Agreed. I wish I had been writing sincerely as opposed to attention whoring and social experimentation way back when I wrote these stories. They would've been much better.
420877 DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE DEAD, YOU MOTHER FUCKER
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I see right through you buddy. Reply to some old comments and -bam!- people are reading your story again. A devious planned, and it worked.
As for your comment, I'm not sure what to say. If you believe you can make this story better then I say go for it.