Brave Heart, Rainbow's cousin, is visiting Ponyville. However, upon meeting Rainbow's friends, the stubborn and proud Alicorn is unimpressed. Will Twilight, Ben, Nyx, Spike and their friends help change Brave Heart's mind?
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JusSonic
Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?
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Brave Heart's what?
4190168
Oops! It was supposed to say 'Visit'. Thanks for catching the mistake.
a Orange anthro Lion with a huge cutie mark of a Crown wearing Heart on its gut attacking Ponyville?
4190364
No, no. Not funny at all.
4190463
It is funny and ironic...and the Alicorn OC isn't mine, it belongs to a pal of mine. Don't judge before you read the whole story.
4190497
ironic shit posting is still shit posting and man edit this its unreadable.
4190553
pretty sure the OC is a parody of braveheart the colors seem right.
4190493 Wasn't supposed to be funny. It was supposed to be serious.
Ponycreator cover art is almost always a bad idea. Better to go without anything than with one of these, especially with an Alicorn.
4191721
And this is a fan-fiction, not a meal or a movie and you only judge with only 1 chapter, not the whole thing. So either you wait until the whole story is up to judge fully or don't read at all.
And no, an Alicorn OC is the not a 'kiss of death' to any fic. That was proven wrong thanks to Penstrokepony's 'Past Sins' stories and it isn't right now.
I don't care what people say. I will just move on and continue working on fics. So long and thanks for all the fish!
4191715
Why so serious?!
I still think your stories are great…despite their many flaws. And while I respect the opinions of almost everyone of your detractors, I still had no idea that my OC would cause so much anger amongst some true-blue MLP fans. And for that, I apologize. It was a terrible mistake for me to have created Brave Heart in the first place. So…lash out all your hatred on me, not Jus. I am willing to take on any insult…well almost.
4194076
Okay, okay, listen, I didn't want to use this because folks think I am using it as a clutch and all but it's true. May as well get it out.
I got aspbergers.
Well ain't you a pile of work? Seems Umachan was right about you.
And by the way he sent me a message. "Tell the little Sperglord that while he can block and silence me on his page, he can't do that on any other. Check out the thread I just started: Link
4194096
Well... that explains everything.
I believe it is spelled Asperger.
Don't listen to those naysayers! This story is great so far! Keep on going!
And you still continue it...
4229031 By naysayers, I mean people who treat this fic harshly!
4230059 No… by naysayers you mean users who give authors like JusSonic constructive criticism. Sure those other guys need to learn to be constructive with their comments, but it's White Knights like you that make it impossible.
4234726 I do not mean that. I meant people who call JusSonic a weak author and stuff, and I don't see him as weak. Heck, I remember seeing in different cartoons that have winged unicorns, and they weren't immortal, so I don't think ALL alicorns are immortal.
4194096 I like your story. Why does it have down votes?
4240084
Because there are people who disliked the story?
4240576 My story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings also have down votes. Want to check it out.
4240617
Uh, no.
Umm....it's good....
...I guess?
I don't know how to feel about it....
so I just gave you an upvote
4243387 Leave JusSonic alone. He's taken enough of your harsh criticism.
4240084 I feel his pain when this happens. It currently is happening to my fic, Nyx's Redemption. But I never dislike any stories from Jus. He's to awesome
>Is alicorn
>has Nyx in story
>Named Brave Heart
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Nope. Nope nope nope nope nope.
4319762
Yeah, so is using a pathetic "Leave Britney Alone" youtube video to mock my friends.