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Deathscar


You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth

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All of her best friends have left Ponyville, each one having departed for a different reason. As such, the only pony left with Pinkie is Rainbow Dash, and even she knew the day when the pegasus would leave would arrive as well. The question isn't whether she can ask Rainbow to stay, but its whether she can say goodbye.


Cover art is by PhillyPu and is inspired by the song of the same name.

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Great fic. Very moving, I liked it. One error I noticed though:

the mare across her

Should be: the mare across from her

otherwise very well done! :pinkiehappy:

4187462 Fixed! Thank you and glad you enjoyed it!

Ha! So i wasnt the only one who was thinking this during this whole season. Rarity is getting close to her dream so is Dash and Twilight but Pinkie the writers arent even bothering to establish a future for her and it pisses me off.

All these years... living here....
I never dared to face my fears...
That one day, you'd all have to leave.
And all the memories we could have made together
never came to be...

If you only knew
how much I care about you...
You'd never fly away
I'll never figure out
why you thought somehow
you had to leave.


If you only knew....
how much I need you.

Rainbow Dash
If I could only have you back.
I wish I could see you once again.
I dream every night of that.
Without you,
I'm not who I'm
supposed to be....
If only you could listen to these words,
because without you,
it's hurting me...

If you only knew
how much I care about you...
You'd never fly away
I'll never figure out
why you thought somehow
you had to leave.

If you only knew....
how much I need you.



Oh Dashie... :pinkiesad2:

Really well did!

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