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chibiachika


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It's been a year since Trixie was humiliated by her greatest opponent, Twilight Sparkle. She's spent the time training, intent to get her revenge. Upon her return to Ponyville, the townsfolk keep referring to Twilight Sparkle as a "filly." Why does Trixie seem to be the only pony to recall an adult Twilight, and could this filly truly be her enemy?

This story does fit into my personal canon following "Magic's Dawn." I tried to make it less important to understand the entirety of that story, but it certainly does help. Feel free to let me know if there's anything I need to explain better, I want to learn how to write stories that reference my older stories, so that I can improve on that.I thank you for any tips you can give me, and will attempt to personally tell all reviewers thanks directly. ^_^

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Interesting. Planning to add to this and explain what happened to make Twilight a filly, though?

Good story. Tracked twice. :twilightsmile:

you need to include a link to your previous fics in the description so things don't seem so random.

397574 Yeah, I could do that. ^_^ Will in just a minute.

397468 I have an entire fic dedicated to that, I referenced it in the description and am about to add a link to it directly. I tried to do what I could to explain it without forcing people to read the other, but I tend to rely a bit too heavily on my personal canon, which I know better than anyone and I forget "You really shouldn't expect everyone to read everything you write." :twilightsmile:

397469 Squee ^_^

Hehe, cute. Twilight snuggling with the Great and Powerful Plushy that is, not Trixie trying to kill her...
Hope to see some more stories in this universe. Filly Twilight is best Twilight :twilightsmile:

398961 Thank you. :twilightsmile: I do plan to write some more stories featuring filly Twilight. She's one of my favorite characters to do! I like her enough that my fic ideas list has a special section just for stories involving her. :yay:

>>chibiachika Good fanfic but plz explain why is Twilight a filly

542539 Looks like you already found "Magic's Dawn" which has the explanation. :twilightsmile: Thanks for reading!

>>chibiachika ya i loved all of ur fanfics :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :yay:

543363 Yay, thank you! :D

Whoops, you've got an 'I' in the very last sentence. Might want to change that to 'Trixie' or 'she'. Considering she only talks in third person.

2093788 Thank you! Just fixed it. :twilightsmile

so cute what happen,

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