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Scootaloo is puzzled when everyone ignores her. Are they being rude? Is she invisible? Is M Night Shyamalan in Ponyville? Let's hope not!

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lol/lol would lol again

On an almost totally unrelated note, I was incredibly surprised by hotdiggedydemon avoiding Scootabuse in SWAG.MOV.

Also, turnabout is fair play. Well done, Bloom.

Thank you for a delightfully silly story. :scootangel:

...Wow. Unintended implications.

I hued considerably from this story. Whoop whoop! :pinkiehappy:

Wonderful. Dat M. Night twist but not really. :rainbowlaugh:

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oo #5 · Apr 4th, 2014 · · ·

Cutie mark cadaver!

I don't deserve to be alive.

and then scoots got literally kicked out of rainbow's house and actually died and then could fly and spy on rainbow dash

Okay that ending was great.

Stalkerloo!

I'm sure that Scootaloo is going to be happy once she realizes that she isn't really dead... And then be utterly furious when she realizes that her friends just played a really cruel joke on her.

Seriously, what the hell, Apple Bloom?

...It was still funny, though.

A bit dark here and there, but funny.

actually giggled/10 king of comedy right here folks

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4183795 Hooray for superfluous spoiler tags!

Pinkie ducked down behind the counter, and activated the brand new ice cream machine. Her acquisition of it had caused some tensions with Lickity Split, who thought Pinkie was trying to drive her out of business and ‘destroy her cutie mark destiny’ but Pinkie had solved this problem by ignoring it.

I love this bit. Pinkie, you're going to have a war on your hands because you can't tell when people don't like the same stuff you do, one of these days. Oh wait, you already did!

Oh and the ending. And the part where Applebloom has to spell out what's going on while 'talking to Sweetie Bell'. But mostly the above part.

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I had it in mind to try and write a faux-episode script about Pinkie Pie nonchalantly destroying Lickity Split's life. But like so many things it fell by the wayside.

Walabio #17 · Apr 5th, 2014 · · 10 ·

It was good except for 3 errors:

* Scootaloo can read.
* Scootaloo cannot get to cloudhouse of Rainbow Dash because it is a cloudhouse off of the ground.
* With the exception of Lyra Heartstrings and Bon Bon who have a toilette, ponies go outside and urinate and defecate publically for fertilizing the flowers (ponycities stink —— ¡one should never walk under Cloudsdale!)

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1. Scootaloo can't read, any time you imagine she has, it's actually because she has an excellent memory.
2. Scootaloo used a ladder
3. This is true, however Rainbow Dash is super selfish and doesn't like to share her fertilizer.

4186674 Rainbow Dash lives in a Cloudhouse, it's not her problem, it's the problem of whatever poor pony lives below her (probably Lickity Split).

It was the thoughtful discussion of potato-derived products that truly made this a grand ol' fic.

With some amount of giggles and or chortles,
lammy

“Ah will never forget you, mah good friend Scootaloo, who died an’ is dead in this grave right here.”

Apple Bloom, master of subtlety. :rainbowlaugh:

In the wise words of Sheogorath...
BORING!

I wonder what would've happened if she exclaimed she got a "being ignored" cutie mark?

And that is why you don't screw with Apple Bloom. :rainbowlaugh:

There was only one thing she could possibly do.

:rainbowhuh:

Rainbow Dash kept awkward eye contact with the small orange pony who had been staring at her for the past half-hour.

:rainbowlaugh:

this needs a seqal :scootangel:

Reminds me of 'the death of eric cartman' for some reason, but MLP instead of south park.

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