After Twilight, her friends and family restored Tree of Harmony, they questioned themselves whether they made the right decision of sending their Elements of Harmony to its origin, what box they are about to find out and how will they face their enemies without the use of Elements of Harmony? It's up to Mystic Tao and his family to give a good valuable advice, lessons and reminders about their true journey, strengths and powers. Question: is it true that Discord's plants really penetrated and damaged the Tree of Harmony, or is it someone else did since the 'Elements Prophecy' began?
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I'm sorry I have to say it like this, but I had to stop with reading after the nightmare.
Your story is very hard to read, because it's written very chaotic. You have talent and aside from stilistic mistakes, your writing style is good, but you tried to press too many different things (from which most are not even related to each other) in the story and you bring suddenly things up without an explanation, just out of nowhere.
This is something you should avoid when writing a story.
Don't exaggerate and make sure that the things you bring in fit to each other and develop new story elements slowly and make a build-up for them, instead of just throwing them in without warning.