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The "Great and Powerful" Trixie has headed out to Appleloosa for a new start and a clean slate, but can she really leave behind a lifetime of bragging and showmareship?

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 19 )

Very cute story; quite enjoyable.

Although I kept imagining the male lead as a pony version of Nigel West Dickens from Red Dead Redemption, ha ha

:trixieshiftright: This story pleases Trixie, though she finds it far too short :trixieshiftleft:

Quite an interesting take on Trixie after fleeing Ponyville; I laughed out loud at Braeburn's charges, so kudos for that.

Solid four stars.

Oh Trixie, when will you learn. :trixieshiftleft:

Hmmm... I believe hijinks are about to ensue in the next chapter. :trixieshiftright:

Hmm... this story is very interesting. :pinkiesmile:

My interest has been doubled. Good work.

Deserves more love, from what i've seen thus far. Good work!:pinkiehappy:

"S'not like I can jus' eat grass, either. Round these parts you're lucky t'find a single blade, let alone a patch big enough t'eat."

To be honest, that line seemed a bit unecessery, more like one of those things you put in there to stave of criticism like "he's a horse, can't he just eat grass?" The way I look at it, it's kinda like saying "can't you just live on a bowl of gruel a day?", well, I CAN, but I wouldnt exactly like it very much. :trixieshiftright: Definently mention that finding good grazing spots is hard to come by, I just thought the line came across as a bit defensive, that' all.

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It probably was, to be honest. Although it could be argued the defensiveness is in-keeping with the character, there.

I liked this story a lot. :twilightsmile: But I do wish that they decided to, uh, you know... stop scamming ponies. Still a very nice story.

Is this going to get reposted every day?

The heck did Trixie eat?!

Trixie, don't you know never to eat foods you don't know? :facehoof:

I liked the story a lot but I have to say it was short

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