This is Luna's secret Diary. No pony knows about it except for her. But now you know. Now you know. Now you shall know all of the pain and heartache that came with being Luna. Why everything happened. Why she became Nightmare Moon.
Fave Character: Princess Luna
This is Luna's secret Diary. No pony knows about it except for her. But now you know. Now you know. Now you shall know all of the pain and heartache that came with being Luna. Why everything happened. Why she became Nightmare Moon.
Great! I absolutely LOVE the idea! It supports my beliefs
[X] Celestia is a troll
[X] Luna has a reason to become Nightmare Moon
No criticism, but some suggestions.
1. In the first chapter, put in Luna's full name. Nox Pallentia Luna.
2. Keep writing!
4179422 Thank you!
4179693 No problem!
Liking this.Couple pointers:
- More eye-catching title perhaps?
- Longer chapters
Other than that,fantastic job!
4180215 Thank you.
Sorry for the short chapters.
Interesting..Luna.. come..come and join the dark side of the force..
4226702 She's coming! I'm going to keep trying to write a diary entry for every single day until she turns into Nightmare Moon. Then the diary is going to end sort of abruptly because she never gets to write in it again. THEY NEED A LUNA EMOTICON
Luna: I told you!!
Celestia: Oh..whoops.
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Quick! Run away from Luna and fly away on a pegasus!
4259804 I read that and I just started laughing so hard