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Thunder Quill


I write when I'm motivated, which, I am disappointed in myself to say, is few and far between, so don't expect chapters often. I'm also a sub par HiE writer that occasionally writes other things.

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Twilight Sparkle is the newest princess of equestria, but when she was younger she had a best friend who she was inseparable from. When he had to move away though, she swore friends off forever until she met the others in Ponyville, but she never forgot Thunder. Now he is back with a secret, one that could change everything.

Amazing Editing Job Done By Pen Brush, a great author, and an even greater friend, please, check out her works.

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Comments ( 12 )

A like and a favourite. This stoty is to my liking and shall be watched closely.

Fantastic work, but there are a few errors in spelling, and one sentence that doesn't make any sense to my tired brain. It was about hugging or something, and because I'm on mobile I can't search it so quote.


Sorry for the inconvenience,

Your reader
~~Flutter-Shy~~

4310589 Ok, thank you for your help.:pinkiehappy:

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I may have messed a few things up in editing, but I wasn't really sure...

99.9% sure Thunder Quill is a Time Lord.

There are a couple of formatting issues, but it's actually written well.

It's anthro for some reason, so despite being written well, it won't be very popular :ajsleepy:.

And what's that group about Scootaloo being a Time Lord? Is she going to appear in this story?

Upvoted.

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You will have to see if he and his sister are. Until then, you will have to wait~

4312802 I find it easier to imagine, 80% of my stories are anthro

Comment posted by Thunder Quill deleted May 6th, 2014
Comment posted by Pen Brush deleted May 6th, 2014

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Pen Brush is right, might want to delete that comment to preserve mystery and suspense, which is 40% of the average Doctor Who episode.

You might want to re-edit it "She is kind of rude, cynical and doesn't care for other ponies that much, but when she needs to, but she has a heart of gold when she wants to.” he said, smiling." is the biggest issue I saw but there were a couple others. Other than that good story, looking forward to seeing more.

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