When Sunset Shimmer was born, she did not know her family, the only family she had was Celestia who had taken her in. Although she did love Celestia, she wanted a real family who had more time for her. She always saw that filly, Twilight Sparkle with her big brother and loving parents. Not to mention her foalsitter, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza! No fair!!! From that day forth she would do whatever she and her friend and Trixie Lulamoon could do to defeat Twilight sparkle and her precious family.
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Please comment your thoughts I want to know what you all think!
Well, I loved it!
Especially the title
Misty Berry
Interesting story. Unfortunately, it feels rushed, could use more description/detail, and there should be more space between the paragraphs.
Thank you for the advice and I kinda agree but I was just sooo exited to post my first story!
4179625, Yeah, you wrote it REALLY fast!
Misty Berry
Hey misty berry
Silver leaf
When r u gonna update?
This was actually quite cute
You literally have me going 'aww' at the thought of the group trying to build a book fort ha! Great plot Although You do need spaces between the dialect makes it less easy to miss you place 
Other than that minor error great story! 
4621313 Thank you sooooooo
much! I will try to fix these errors
Silver leaf
I think I've read this before... it's cute to see filly versions of the "Unicorn Trio".
4685113 What do you mean, you read this before.
Anyways, glad you liked it!
4685274 I think I read this before I got a Fimfiction account. It seems familiar.
4685540 Ohh…….
What is this supposed to be a crossover with?
4767651 Equestria girls. But that doesn't come until later in the story
4769425 Oh. Wait, I am not so sure that counts as a crossover. I mean, isn't Equestria girls just a part of MLP:FiM?
4770128 yes it is, but this is a crossover with humans/eg.
4770437 I still don't get it.
But I won't pry into it any further. Best of luck with your stories.
4770479 this is the story of sunset shimmer's life and at some point in her life she goes to canter lot high and is mean and then a little later twilight comes in and boom, we have the equestrian girls movie.
Sorry for the confusion!
Silver Leaf
i like hope to read more soon