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Figments


"Figs you're just peak irony." --Caligari87

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"A lie begets a lie, and the world must be protected by one."

Skyward Arrows, a simple author on the run from his own city, is faced with a decision that will change the course of history forever. Yet with every power comes a hefty price.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )

Quite an interesting start to the story, I'm going to keep an eye on this one. Although the fact that you listed Discord in the characters section was a bit of a spoiler :/ Oh well, can't wait to see what happens next!

389809

Thanks. But Discord is coming into the story in such a way that I believe one wouldn't expect

389874
Discord: Celestia! I AM YOUR DAUGHTER!

Celestia: ...What?

Discord: :trollestia:

397052
Lol no. Not like that. You'll see after the first chapter.

If anyone could offer their opinion of the story as it stands, I would love to hear from you guys!

398991

I thought it was fairly good, I certainly have a lot of questions as to where the story could be going, but that's to be expected.
I hope your next chapters go well!

Could use a prereader, dialogue was a bit bland to me, and the writing needs a bit of work. Otherwise, decent enough. :scootangel:

510032 I love the idea of this story, very interesting and original. (Or I just haven't seen anything like this.)

398991
Very interesting idea, and fairly well done, but overall it needs fine-tuning. As it stands now, you have 2.5/5 stars in my book, but that could easily go up with a bit of touching up. Try getting a prereader, even try getting an editor. If you're willing to wait a week or so, I'd happily do that for you. This week, though, I'm busy.

819538

Sure. I can wait.

397100

You'll see after the first chapter.

Complete

What?

Someone's been playing MYST, this is cool!^_^

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