When an old threat emerges from the distant past, Rainbow Dash must team up with the world's strongest fighter to find the legendary Dragonballs. Along the way, their bond of friendship will have to guide them through the hells of war and the peace of love. Together, they must face against the darkness that lies in the heart of all men.
The critics
Neal Gaiman- Greatest thing I have ever seen
Greg Wiseman-I think after reading this, I'll go into retirement and have him write Gargoyles season 4
GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!-Lewis Lovehaug
God, I love this time of year!
Chapters (10)
This needs more cocaine....and dead hookers.
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I'm not done yet!
4167396 Charlie sheen wants his cocaine naaaaaawh!
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Sad part is, this fic was made before that, so I couldn't add him to it...But I have to do that later.
Used to be a very popular and well-made fic about Vegeta called Pony Ball Z on this site, but then the author stopped his writing career after flamers got to him before his fans did. And so deleted the infamous fic.
Hmm... MLP and Dragonball? Will read. Noticing the romance tag; I just have to hope for AppleDash... But, knowing most authors, I won't get it. Nonetheless! I will still read this regardless of my OTP being involved!
It's good, dood. Just work on your pacing. That was a little too fast, dood.
Also, some names were messed up: Broly, Vegeta, and Frieza.
Spelling errors everywhere, that can be fixed easily. I'd quote some, but my vita hates stuff, dood. I say you get 3/5 moustaches overall
But yeah, pacing, spelling, and other gramatical stuff are needed almost as much story and detail (I still suck at pacing and detailing), dood.
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Yeah, I was an idoit when it came to writing when I was 13. I would've fix it up but then it would've removed the classicness of it
Why are some letters bolded?
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You have obivously never taken Frank Miller's school of writing
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Well,I ws referring to classic as in the "This is vintage" type of sense. This is bad, heck this is really bad. Make no bone about it. But really, I think the description gives the idea that this is not serious away
Spell their names correcly. I love DBZ and the idea of a crossover sounds great but correct names has a lot to do with people reading the story to the end. Don't be the Dragon ball Evolution of crossovers. Take pride in your work like a Saiyan and fix the mistakes.
Do Freeza, Cell, and/or Cooler appear in this story? If so, then when and where?
Why was Apple jack and Rainbow Dash referee to as guys?