Nopony blames me for being a klutz. They laugh it off, saying "Mistakes happen" or "That's our Ditzy."
But I know better. My father did, too.
He reminds me of that all the time.
[Fix: If you've already read it, no need to go through it again, as it's mostly grammatical errors. Unless you want to. If that's the case, move along.]
Well, that was ...
4253310 I'm so sorry...
4253359 Poor Derpy!!! Over all it was a good story.
p.s. Please make Derpy's father suffer!!!
;(
4255759 I won't say anything, partly because I have no intention of creating a sequel or prequel. I just wanted to get something out before Easter Break.
He died peacefully, however. Passed away, mourned by many. He was a respected member of the community.
4256576 Well at least he's dead. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?
4256715 Eh, why not?
Shit, dude, why didn't I read this sooner?
I went in expecting one thing, and you completely blindsided me in the best way possible
Amazing job, man. Keep it up.
4445310 Thanks! To be honest, the story just sat around in my mind for a while. I just figured it would be a good idea to get it posted here.
4445482 Oh, and I found this pic on google. It would make for awesome cover art.
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4446102 thanks! Will use!
I am reading this! I am READING THIS!
4456948 Hurrah!
Pwease moar?
4537458 Sorry, but I really can't do this story any more justice. It's more profound to leave it as is, a loop of pain with no foreseeable end.
in the story BUBBLES, it was derpys' mother that was the antagonist. in this story, its her father. its such a sad, lonely story. I hope derpy will get better.
A never-ending cycle...
Ouch.