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I think my sanity just hit the floor. And keep falling.

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Give Scootaloo a few minutes, she'll probably find it.:scootangel:

>spoilers in synopsis
this had better be good:twilightangry2:

... This was decent. Though you could stand to use less colorful names. Can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the story :scootangel:

Hey, you brought it over from Eka's! Nice!

This has to be the strangest thing I have ever read ever. My mind is stuck in a perpetual state of "dafuq??". I want more.

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While you're looking, let me know if you find mine. It's this little funny looking thing in a jar. It's probably dusty, as it's never been used.

I remember this from eka's, if this is being reuploaded here, does that mean its gonna be updated? Or is this just a repost?

Vore?Booooring.Bring on the shitting nipple dicks and then we'll talk creepy.

Wow that story was so crazy I could barely stomach it.:trollestia:

this sounds like a story that i don't want to read for fact that when i clop all i can think about is ponies doing weird weird shit :pinkiesick:

Oh hey, a decent vore story...

Still trying to find some of the more hardcore versions (the details in other stories aren't very helpful.) I appreciate that you didn't wimp out like so many others.

So , Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo are still alive, but as clones?

okay who thought they had actually died?
its in the description that death is now only an inconvenience


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i think its more along the lines of they get their mind put into the clones body, and then the two minds fuse into one; but due to them being basically the same nothing really changes.

4164874 I'm curious about how they kept their fur colour... And yes? I'm not entirely sure, but I think she is connecting them with the clone...

So think of a CMC/Twilight hybrid. May or may not contain extra limbs.

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I think it is some sort of contrived mirror pool magic that will rebirth the CMC with Celestia as their second mother. Probably birthed in the usual way too, given the mention of Celestia's womb.

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Pretty close to it. Twilight (and her Mirror clone she made with a modified version of the pool's spell) just finished preliminary work on an Eclipse Phase style spell that they plan on permenantly casting over the whole country. Re-embodying the Crusaders is the first test (and keeps Applejack and Rarity from causing problems), but due to various issues and beta testing refinement, they have to take a while longer and rebirth them the slow way over a couple of months since they don't have a template body from before getting eaten.

Permavore is possible here, but it is supposed to be between two consenting adults. Basically, letting the host soul slowly wrap around the victim's until it becomes impossible to disentangle them. (usually takes pretty good patience and willpower to do it without consent, though. But it is possible.)

Twilight found herself splattered in multi-colored goo as the pressure was released in the mother of all burps, coating her thoroughly in the stomach juices of her beloved Princess.

So, did Celestia puke?

This story is... Strangely arousing.... I like! :pinkiehappy:

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why would you spoil your own story? :raritydespair:

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I was thinking the same thing :trixieshiftright:

What
The
Fuck
...
Ok, i think that this is too much internet for a day.
[Take a pistol and shot himself]
Now speaking seriously, WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ!!
B*cking Tia, she's a cannibal :twilightoops:
And... and... i don't know dude, this is just... weird!!

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Same here

4187801 Yes, it rather does suggest that both Celestia and Luna routinely ate ponies in the past... on a rather permanent basis.

I'm having rather a difficult time wondering what Luna's reason for becoming NMM was in this bizarre world.

Maybe more ponies wanted to die in Celestia's gut than hers or something? :twilightoops:

Of course, that's asking a mindless fetish story to actually create a sensible storyline.

So twilight found a way to bring back the cmc. I'm okay with this.

It's these slice of life-y bits that I prefer over the eating erotica, although I am a little embarrassed to admit that I did pop a boner reading chapter 3.

Comment posted by PinkiePieFox deleted Apr 25th, 2014

W-Will there be a new chapter soon? :duck:

I only read the fucking description and my face has already been acquainted properly with my palm. I'll read it.

way to drag it out. I got bored enough waiting for the story to get on with the happenings that I gave up and skipped to the end. Pacing was so slow a snail could beat it.

I don't get it. What exactly is The Spell? And will it also affect non-pony creatures like Spike?

Well, that was quite somthing. Unique and fairly well written concept though. Any word on a new chapter?

Have an upvote.

...Huh.

Well, the leitmotif of the story is frankly weird. I`m quite unsure what to think of it. On one hand, I`ve never seen anything pleasant about eating... or being eaten. On other, some interactions were rather hilarious. Eh.

I haven't read it yet, but from the description it sounds a lot like this. http://aryion.com/g4/view/264240 Is this based off from that? Also are you the author to the story I just linked?

Edit: Ah so the last chapter ya wrote IS that story.

5248569 The Spell lets everypony in equestria act out every vore-esque fetish with no consequences.

which one of the chapter have fusion transformation?

I like the ideas, but this was a little hard to follow as I wasn't 100% on who was doing what to whom most of the time. More detail was needed. For example, I don't think you even said that Luna penetrated Twilight before it suddenly happened. This got better later on, but it was still distracting for the first half.
In the future, as a general rule, state the name of the person/pony doing the action at the beginning of each paragraph, no matter how small. You keep saying 'she' despite the fact that there are three females doing things, sometimes all in the same paragraph, so you'll understand the confusion.
While I hope you decide to continue, as there aren't enough good vore stories on this site, I equally hope that you'll write this out on Microsoft Word first as it should catch a lot of the little mistakes I noticed here and there.
And while Bleeding could have said it better, the story does drag on after a bit. Maybe transformation is your thing, and that's what you were trying to convey, but for me I was hoping for them to just transform so that Luna could do something with them as quickly as possible.

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Sorry to say there probably won't be any more. Take note of the last time the author was online (almost two years)...

don't stop this madness it's great so any heads up on the chapter progress

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Did I really say "pop a boner"? Two years ago me had no sense of subtlety.

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