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SonicBoom
I am a Alicorn In Equestria. I love writing books.
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I will start with the next staff soon, so keep on your toes.
Bullshit Translator: I'm too lazy and unintelligent to recreate already established characters, so here's the equivalent of my erect dick slamming against a keyboard.
4642651 I lost both feet during the war on bad shipfics. I have no toes, you ableist asshole.
I'm glad someone did, cause I didn't.
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Be prepared if you don't want whatever happened to this story to happen to that one.
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Translation: Fuck you, I do what I want! Your words have no power here! For I am a God!
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ATTACK!
Alright comrades... Let the battle begin!
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Brothers! Sisters! Today we stand against this mockery of a fic! Today we stand against the evil that threatens our great Fimfic! Today! We shall wreak havoc on those who seek to disrupt our ponies with half asseries and abominations that they call fanfiction!
We seek to destroy those who see their fanfictions as golden wonders! Who's fanfictions are the very pinnacle of writing!
ATTACK MY BRETHREN! SHOW THEM THE TRUTH!
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This fanfic sucks. The characters are OOC all the time, the plot has tons of plotholes, and the basic idea just seems played out.
OR *slashes sword against the author*
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4642651 I don't think that will be neccesairy....
Alright just got back from getting a snack an-OH SWEET CELESTIAS FLANK WHAT IS THAT!!??
Ok reading through this i've noticed...the distinct lack of...proper characterisation, you don't even try to keep anypony/dragon in character. The very point of writing fanfiction for a series or a franchise is to convey a story, in which the characters included are placed in a scenario that would most likely not happen in the show/book/franchise. The whole thing needs to be believable, which means that the characters must be in character. People read it to see the reactions of the character and the actions they take to resolve said scenario.
What you've done is slapped the names of the characters on a pile of garbage and sold it, expecting people to buy it.
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What's OOC? I know what OC is but not that.
4851502 'Tis Tartarus.
4851506 '
Out of character
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It's a plane!
No, it's a bird!
No, it's Tartarus!
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Ooh. Anyways, I saw that Manes was in the group and she's thinking of banning Zeldafand...I think.
4851491 We don't have toes! We have hooves Trottel!!
4851539 Manes? shiiiiet. We need to make things serious?.for now.
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She deleted her comments, so the world may never know. Plus she could've been kidding.
4851543 Trottel?
Lmao no words
I should probably read it now. Shouldn't I?
4851561 It's German you uncultured Swine!
(Joking! I mean no offence! Please don't hurt me!)
4851556 I hope so...
4851569 Wait...you already broke a rule?
4851570 img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130416021458/glee/images/f/f1/28681-nicki-minaj-Hell-no-gif-LuBd.gif
*Hurts*
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I started to then read the authors note. Then my editorial senses kicked in and everything after that is a little fazy....
4851581 es tut mir so leid! Keine Beleidigung gemeint war!
4851590 Eh, save yourself the trouble
4851595 What sorry I don't speak transformers
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Translation:
I am so sorry! No offense was meant!
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Yeah I'll do it soon.
4851616 Oh okay!
4851616 Ah! jemand, der Deutsch soeak können?
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Hat Google übersetzen zählen?
4851638 ....really?
Google translate?
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I have family that's German.
4851657 Oh really?
It also should be 'tut Google übersetzen zählen?'
Hat means has. Tut means does!
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Oops sorry.
4851724 Has Google translate count?
meine was für ein Fehler! XD
Also, I just noticed, he's been following me here, probably after my review of his first story.
How precious.
Hmm...
GTFO
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No no no, you have to do it properly:
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yR7LZxp-IU]
Alright, first chapter.
...
4853115 You have ruined me
Author.... I hope you know that even though this is FanFiction, you still have to keep your characters in character, unless you provide a reason for them being OOC (and a damn good one).
4851218 Best.