Hello, I am HaviTheWerecat! I enjoy My Little Pony: FiM (obviously) and watching anime.
Vinyl Scratch and Neon Lights have been best friends for longer than they can remember. Meeting in Elementary school and never leaving each other's side ever since.
They are all grown up now, and Neon Lights begins to suspect that he's beginning to have new feelings for his childhood friend. Will Vinyl return his feelings, or reject him? Can Neon even gather the courage to tell her?
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There are not enough Vinyl Lights ship fics.
You have my attention.
And a thumbs up! I would like to say though while I am not that great at grammar myself (I am in fact quite terrible at times), I feel there is a lot of pauses in your writing where too many full stops/periods are being used, where maybe a comma could be used instead to let it flow more naturally for some readers. Maybe. I might be talking out of my ass, but I am not notorious myself for using way too many fricken comas.
I shall watch with interest!
4149013 That's kinda why I wanted to write this. Even though I prefer VinylxOctavia I really thought that there just wasn't enough VinylxNeon fics. Don't get me wrong, I'm not JUST writing this because there needs more VinylxNeon fics, I truly think it's a cute ship and everything, I just happen to prefer VinylxOctavia.
The story flows fine for me please write more, and often. I wanna see what happens next
Great job. With the prologue and this chapter, we see a budding romance, now you need a conflict something that needs to be overcome. I may be that Neon needs to tell Vinyl how he feels, or that he isn't gay. Or if you want to have another mare or stallion get in the way and start screwing up everything. I would say withing the next 2 chapters, depending on how long this story is, you should introduce some conflict. Grammar is good. I am putting this in my favorites so I can learn about the updates faster.
I like the new cover. It looks cool.
4168920 Thx, though I think I should put more color in the background. :P
Nice chapter. I liked how you have Neon start to feel the upset stomach, also I liked how you introduced Octavia. I liked the original cover though. That is my opinion. Best of luck with future chapters.
I love how the story is going, but I don't like how vinyl's tail was blonde.
4178445 I Always saw her as being albino, which would've made her fur and mane really light. And then when Vinyl go older she began to find blonde to be really lame. So she went and dyed it. Sorry it's not exactly something that you agree with. I get that way too when writers make up last names for Octavia like "Philharmonica" or "Von Clef."
IT looks like Note has a crush on Vinyl too. This is going to get good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Hmm...
I've always shipped Vinyl and Neon.
I think I'll give it a read...
*adds to read later fics*
For Vinyl. Now lets see if jealousy springs now, with Neon, or with Noteworthy when Neon and Vinyl get together.
Love triangles somepony's heart always gets broken
I liked this chapter, i Just didn't think the ending was believable, because Neon got out of that conversation quickly. Great job with the story.
4214210 Well Viny's not gonna just give up trying to get him to spill the beans. It's not like she's gonna just forget about it.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is so sad. Man. I was routing for a Noteworthy and Octavia romance.
Well poop. I guess my NeonxVinyl hopes are screwed.
Wow. Neon is taking this harder than I thought. Well it is Noteworthy to the rescue. I hope he can help explain to Vinny what is wrong with Neon.
Oh Neon, you need to stop this. You need to talk to her before its too late.
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just tell her!!!
Alright than, HENCHMEN GET THE MAGIC PORTAL READY WE HAVE A PERVERT/ASSHOLE TO TAKE CARE OF... (MESSAGE TO THE ASSHOLE) IM GONNA FIND YOU AND WHEN I DO IM GONNA RIP YOUR DAMN HEART OUT, WHAL KEEPING IT ATTACHED TO YOUR BLOOD VAINS, AND KEEPING YOU ALIVE, THAN IM GONNA PROCEED TO DO THE EXSACT SAME THING TO EVRY SINGEL DAMN ORGAN IN YOUR BODY UNTIL I GET TO YOUR PEA SISED BRAIN TO WHICH I WILL PROCEED TO DRILL IN TO YOUR THICK SKULL,................AND SO I WILL BE OFF NOW TO DELIVER YOUR (AS PAINFULLY AS POSSIBLE) DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also good chapter I'm enjoying this so far.
He thinks he loves her....... SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Ok pleas forgive me for what i say here)
.........marefrend.....ARE YOU FUCKING KIDING ME, NO, I REFUSE, I DENIY THIS, I REGECT YOUR REALITY AND SUBSTITUTE MY OWN, JUST..........FUCK SHIT SON OF A BITCH ASS DAMN PEACE OF CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY, WHY DO YOU DO THIS, WHY WHY WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
been waiting so long when you gunna update?
plz end the righters block is such a good fic
:flutter cry:
Hey everyone! Don't worry! I am back in another attempt to finish this story! The next chapter should be out by tonight because I'm gonna sit at my laptop until it's done.
6143025 TY SO MUCH
It was worth the wait
This story updated. YEAH!!!! Thank you. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for showing this story isn't dead.
Aww so cute
5585819 -aplause
Love this two cutiepies
You sir are a saint. 2 djpon3 ships in one story is a hard thing to write but you nailed it
It might get better in the end
Why you give up
Why did you end it
