Trixie is tired of all the bulling and teasing so she tries to end her life. However she's gets interrupted by a pink pony.
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4th wall breaking...instant like and fave
Thank you. I always did enjoy Pinkie Pie's 4th wall breaking.
I think you meant 'headed towards Saddle Arabia since not all of the ponies there hated her.'
Whoops. Thank you for pointing that out. I'll change that right away.
science=a type of study; since=for the reason of.
In any case, have a fav and a like.
Thank You.
Separate the paragraphs each time the speakers changes and correct some spelling errors. Other than that, it's a cute story.
Okay. Thank you for your feed back.
Not specially good but for some reason I can't leave without telling how well done it is. Just the minor grammatical and setup mistakes but nothing big.
Keep writing.
In your short description it says 'Ersaminor'. Its meant to be Ursa Minor.
Pinkie broke the fourth wall....dislike
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5287187 sorry bout that, that was kinda rash, I'll read the story fully then judge next time
5288358 It's okay.
5290618 cdn.makeagif.com/media/11-19-2014/huHaBK.gif Have a funny image of rainbow gluttonizing herself :D (all the images on my Page are all made by me through various youtube vids
5290622 Oh that's cool.
5290637 Heres the link of the vid, its quite funny actually
5290665 Are they potato chips?
5290697 No. Its cheese. That kinda looks like Glowstone
also AJ says on the sign
5290708 Ohhh
I saw.
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JUST made another gif cdn.makeagif.com/media/11-19-2014/n3TOHU.gif
5290735 That was a good episode.
5290746 The Chair was the highlight of it
Made a new gif to replace rainbow wild cdn.makeagif.com/media/11-19-2014/AEOQh5.gif
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