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BlueSun52


Hey there, everypony! I'm a big time video gaming nerd and love to write stories and make art. Hope that you all like my stories and become good friends!

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This story is a sequel to Guardian of Equestria - Rise of the Blue Sun


An ancient prophecy has been fulfilled and now Equestria is experiencing a new age of peace thanks to its new guardian, Hawke. Now he lives in Ponyville with the rest of his friends and the love of his life, Twilight Sparkle and continues to stay ever vigilant against those who would cause harm.

Now new threats are rising from the shadows, including old and powerful enemies and he must once again become the hero he was born to be. But this time, he will have an unexpected help on the way.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 43 )

Lol, I bet you spent most of your time drawing the picture instead of the story XD! (Maybe you are, maybe you aren't, That I will never know ''\__(o.0)__/'' )

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(With a voice from South Park) Niccccccccceeeeee.....
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That's funny cause it sounds like Pee-Pee XD (you're not laughing...)
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FIRST!!!

And there's Pinkamena Diane Pie, but we call her Pinkie Pie for short. She is no doubt the craziest, party-obsess, sugar-loving pony that would always make everything fun just by smiling at you and always knows how to throw a wicked party.

Uh... You might wanna add
'Somepony with the ability to break/bend the laws of physics...'

... Hawke forgot to mention Pinkie Pie's ability to bend the law of physic ...

Do you know that Jack Sparrow's real name is...
Jack Birdie? Well, I bet he is Hawke's and Sparrow's father... Get it? Jack Birdie = Bird = Hawke = Sparrow? U don geddit?... Oh well, See ya next chap!

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Haha By the way, Do you mind if I copy your cover picture an edit it in Photoshop so I can make it HD? I'll give the result later... When I learn how to use photoshop... As in about 10 years from now... Well good bye. (I'm not serious LoL XD)

4483289 Sssuurrre~, no problem :ajsmug:. Anyways though, I was planning on making a newer one. Hopefully it'll be just like prequel.:pinkiehappy:

Superfine? Nah more like saying he's-totally-fine-even-if-he's-not

Poor Monnark, he escaped tartarus and no one even remembered him, a person from vine once said, and I quote

No one! Cares!

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Well... For some reason I have a feeling that Twilight wants Hawke to take her virginity as fast as possible.

And, oh would you look at that, Sparrow's gonna be a player.

The comedy from here is hairlaioreas
Also I condor that he is Mona flipping gentleman

A sequel is already out!? :twilightoops: Seriously, I was not tracking that until earlier today... An interesting story so far. :pinkiehappy:

After reading the story so far, I think I have the perfect opening for this story.
Drama by Sid Opening to Fullmetal Alchemist: Prince of Dawn

4667716 :rainbowlaugh: Better late then never and thanks for the opening, I really like it.:twilightsmile:

SparXelle (pronounce Sparkselle, [Ha(wk)X(Twil)Ight HaXIght] Haksight)

*sigh* the ol' 'I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE' Cliché...don't tell me that hawke's proposal to twilight will be postphoned for a while because ulture's coming for him...oh and don't tell me that hawke's gonna survive in this story...again...(Duh, protagonist are always winning...unless its a twist ending)

I'm really sorry if my comment somewhat hurts you but I just can't help it; Too much clichés and too obvious...

Tell you what cause I'm a nice guy I'm gonna keep reading the story, I wanna see how you tell the story, I expect it to be intriguing

Welp see you next chapt, >̴̴̴̴̴͡ .̮ Ơ̴͡kay!

At least sparrow had good thinking of clean the place.

If this was a clop, I would guess they had an orgy party...I said IF it was, m'kay...

YOU HAVE SUMMONED ME.

What, it says Guardian in the title...

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Wait, maybe I'm the red thing on top with the evil eyes...?

5177335 Maybe you should read it and find out, hmmm:duck:

Well he did get punishment in a small way

I was thinking about this while reading the proposal for some reason... :derpyderp2:

SON OF A... DAMN CLIFFHANGER!!!

lol cant wait for the next chapter and maybe a 3rd story for hawky and sparrow livin peaceful life hawky with his wife and his brother with sweetie bell

great ending... hope to see another sequel about this storyline

5488304 Thanks and I'm going to write about it in a blog update so watch out for that.:twilightsmile:

awesome ending my friend and show that blueprick what for

I could only imagine this playing at the end of the chapter, but with the characters of the story.

Hologram by Nico Touch The Wall (Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood)

5490668 I think you missed up the link:rainbowhuh:

the moment blueballs tried wat he did and got wat was comin 2 him i rofled so hard :rainbowlaugh: and this was a great story and the ending was great i can hear twilight screaming 2 the heavens right now lol :rainbowlaugh::yay::moustache:

5542571 Thank you:twilightsmile: Glad that you enjoyed it

That was one hell of a way to purpose to somepony. I don't think there way any way better.:yay:

Man that was better than the first one. I'm not saying "Rising of the Blue Sun" was bad, I'm just saying I like this story better.:twilightsheepish: Anyways great job on this story. I can see a big change from you writing this story from your last. Also I was laughing my a** off when Blueblood tried to object to the marriage and the got zapped.:rainbowlaugh: Alright catch ya later. Peace!:twilightsmile::ajsmug::yay::raritywink::heart::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::trollestia::moustache:

Next chapter when they are all running they fail to see a trip wire in the ground and they all trip while twlight slowly pinches the bridge of her nose or any equine equivalent to a nose
Read in nibblers voice from futureroma

5542999 I love this story a lot I hope u can make a sequel to this

Now for the sad third part which deals with Twilight's imortality and Hawke's pending mortality

He look down to see that there was another hole on the other side and soon found himself flying....out of another well? He was flying through the sky until he came tumbling down onto the ground unconscious.

Ah, don't worry, he's fine.

Sparrow started to open his eyes as he was hearing chirping of birds and the sun was shinning on him.

Ah, what the heck? He is!? I was just kidding!

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