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A series of oneshots about Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Bittersweet.
If you downvote or see some grammar mistakes, please, explain what exactly you didn't like or inform me what I should change.

1. Importance.
Rainbow immediately knew she said too much, the tears that began shimmering in Applejack's eyes were proof enough of this. Only her pride kept them from running down openly onto her cheeks.

2. A chance to mourn.
The last few days were a mixture of worried glances and condolences. Usually bright and happy mood of Sweet Apple Acres was replaced by forced assurances that everything is fine and silent tears, shed when no one was looking.

Cover art used with a permission. Link:
http://ryoshockwave.deviantart.com/art/Fly-334179138

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

G- DAAWWWWWW!!!

I can't possibly complain about this. Only problem I see is the length, but it's just long enough in retrospect.

4337350 I'm glad you liked it :) It's possible that some of the oneshots published here will be expanded as longer stories in the future.

Huh?
No....no.....no!
No! What? Rainbow, why?
AJ, why?
Just, ugh.

Aw.....:rainbowkiss:
I liked the one before, but this one is cuter.

Comment posted by golden-redhead deleted May 4th, 2014

These are very interesting ideas and I'm excited to read more.

Why so many down votes?? I absolutely love this. :heart: Cant wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

Too much sad AJ and too much condescending RD.


Vote: Pending

I know you stated these to be bittersweet, but must AJ always need to be the one crying? And I'll just assume friend-shipping and totally fine with that. That's a big plus. I've seen so much AppleDash romantics to be much of a fan anymore.

No errors in writing jumped out to me, so doing good.

4349499 So far it were only two stories, don't worry, the rest of them won't be as similar as these two :ajsmug: And yes, friend-shipping. FimFiction just needs more fan fics about their friendship!

And thanks!

When is the next chapter?

4667259 Soon :) It takes me some time to finish them, because English isn't my first language and I want it to be OK.

OH.

NO.

SHE.

DIDN'T.

OMG NO!!! GRAMMY SMITH!! WHY?!? WHY GRAAAANNNNNYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?

:fluttercry:

I love apple dash don't get me wrong but after watching mare a thon. I realized it can never work:fluttershysad:that story is amazing!:pinkiehappy:

It gives me such feels! Too much feelsies!:applecry:

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