I feel a slight poke in my side. I roll over and scratch my belly. "Wisdom?"
"Five more minutes." I snore.
"You're blocking the door." I crack open an eyelid, Fluttershy hides behind her hair. "It's alright,"
I stand and stretch. "I guess I was tired." I smooth out my feathers and yawn. "Going somewhere?" I curl up on my bed ready to go back to sleep.
"Oh, Applejack asked me if I could swing by today." She tapped her chin with a hoof. "And I have a spa day with Rarity. then Pinkie has a party planned, and I need to Feed my animals."
Something tells me that her list is a heck of a lot longer than that. I figure she could use some help to shorten the list, even if it's just by one. "I can take care of that." Her eyes widen. "Don't worry, I won't eat any of them."
"Umm..." She traces a hoof over the wooden floor. She mumbles something incoherent. I raise an eyebrow. "You might frighten some of them. I mean...you're really big... A Lot bigger than some of the other gryphons I've met..."
I sigh. "Fluttershy, I'm pretty sure that if they can handle Discord they can handle little old me."
"Demon spawn!" I dodged another attack from the army of woodland creatures. Angel bunny had rallied them against me. They were now firing Acorns and pebbles at me. "Eat your dinner already!" A pile of a suspicious brown substance wizzed past my head. it smacked "That's it!"
I grabbed the carrot and charged the barrier. The bunny general shouted orders at his troops. I leaped over the barrier and grab the bunny. He squirmed and made squeaking sounds. He tries to bite down on my hand and gets a Mouthful of carrot. I drop him and he attacks the carrot with gusto.
I sigh. The rabbits go back to their activities that don't involve a coup. I swear that rabbit is the devil incarnate. A few birds had sided with me but those were few and far between.
I flex my wings. The feathers are all crooked and there's dirt and twigs sticking out of them. They're starting to itch and there's gunk in between I pluck some out and yelp. The bunny looks at my wings and points at the bookshelf. I roll my eyes at him. "I'm not interested in reading right now." He facepaws. I watch as the tiny rabbit hops over to the book shelf and points at a specific book. Following his instructions, I take the book and look at the title. Preening for dummies. I glare at him. "Nice to know what you think of me."
I open the book and start reading.
I expertly plucked another twig from my wing with my beak. My left wing is picked clean of every offending bit of dirt. I flap it a few times. Good as new. I start on the next wing. There's a knock on the door and the animals all freeze. The door flies open and a bright pink pony bounces in. "Ohmycelestia! I heard there was a new gryphon in town and I got so excited! What's your name?!? I'm Pinkie! Why are you staying in Fluttershy's place? Do you like animals? What's your favorite ice-cream? Mine is chocolate! I mean who doesn't..!" I clamped a claw over over her mouth before anything else poured out.
"My name is Wisdom, I'm staying at the library, I like vanilla icecream and will you please stop licking my hand?"
When I pull my claw away she resumed her jabbering. Suddenly she gasped like she just remembered something important. "I almost forgot! I need to throw you a welcome to Ponyville party!" She zooms off faster than anything I've ever seen in my life!
I chuckle to myself. This is going to be interesting.
If you dislike my story can you atleast tell me why? I'd like to fix whatever it is.
Well, you need to fix a little bit of errors here and there, but, okay.
4317986 thank you! I'll go through and fix them once I get the time.
I'm sorry, but another error to fix. In the beginning of your story, you always start sentences with the word I. Also, the story is hard to understand with 7 chapters. Keep up the good stories!
4327935 Thank you for pointing that out. I didn't notice. The story's not over yet. Three or four more chapters.
I can't wait to see them. I love to read awesome stories like these.
I gueeess I'll spend some of my valuable time to read this small little fanfic to see how it is.
Well, I'll go ahead and give you a thumb up. This is a great idea but this story could use a lot of improvement so far.
4355539 the freak out over having a new body.
4355776 thanks! Everyone one this site is so nice! ...... Most of the the time.
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