Not really a story writer but i'll try my best. Just don't be too hard on me if i suck because... i aready know...
Cybertron, home to the Transformers. For many generations war has ravaged the planet against the Autobots and the Decepticons. enemies who were friends, rivals who were brothers fight in an endless battle for peace and total domination. To escape the war, a group of Autobots fled from Cybertron with a very pariculat weapon. The Allspark. But their plan goes south as they soon crash of a very particular planet.... [Being Re-Edited...]
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Holy shit dude.
dude what megatron said... quote "now you shall witness its dismemberment" Unquote
THAT WAS MY LINE!!!!
>>Unicron Sorry mate had to steal that from yeah
Overall, I find the concept of this story interesting, but the spelling and grammar are atrocious. I know there are points were the typos and misspellings are deliberate for comedic effect, but they're buried under a mountain of unintentional errors, which wrecks the comedy. I've read the first 4 chapters and they all need to be run through spell-check and then edited by a human.
>>GBscientist Thanks for that. I'll reedit it all.. Knew it was horrible anyways
What continuity is this? G1? Unicron trilogy? Movie?
>> Gyvon a mix of G1 and the power of IMAGINATION... Its G1 ish
like the cover art ITSTIME4ADEATHBATTLE!!!!!!!