Eric Winters, a research and development employee at the Maine Wildlife Park, has a bad day. He's forced to do his coworker's work, gets caught in the rain, nearly swept off the road by a landslide, and trips on a basket two steps from his front door. But his life gets turned upside down when he forgets just how his mother died, and he stumbles on the franchise of "My Little Pony".
How will finding a website change his life, and why did it all begin when Eric finds a little filly named Eclipse in the basket.
Chapters (6)
Now that i've learned the difference between the short summary and the long one, I will be changing that... eventually
I really like this story. Keep it up!!!
4176228 Thank you very much.
Becouse of you this story's first day on the site was better than I expected
Thank you!
Ok, I see a lot of areas that could use some improvement, but, being a long time resident of Maine, myself, this story has caught my attention.
4177651 Well, Damn, I don't know the area of Maine too well, as I don't live there, but I do have google earth, and I know the area of Maine I am talking about so that should help.
This is a long term project, so any help in critics would be useful, but try to word your responses with a little respect for me. This story means a lot to me.
Thank you
4177664 I did not mean it as disrespect. It was a statement of opinion that there is room for improvement. Had there been anything in my thoughts that would have lead to disrespect, then I would not have bothered commenting, or adding to my favorites.
The reason I added it is because I wish to see where you take this. As I have said, you have my attention. That means I intend to read more.
If you like, I would be willing to offer help with this, to help with the areas that I see could use some improvement. Also, where as I know parts of Maine pretty well, I could probably be a good source of information about the area.
Keep going with this. I think I should also check out your other fics. The descriptions look interesting, in particular the one where Nyx takes flight lessons from Dash.
4177679 Sure, and thanks for the support; I guess I'm just not used to it.
And I might have to take you up on the help, but I should be fine.
I have the second chapter ready for prereading if you are interested.
And again, thanks
4177686 There is good odds that I probably wont be back on FiMfic until tonight, because I have a very busy day ahead of me, between bills, getting the truck in the shop, the bike possibly into the shop, haircut, running the roomie ragged because I can, and then, going out for Karaoke with a friend this evening.
So, knowing how my day will probably go, I would most likely return to find a new chapter to read lol
If you still need a proofreader when I get back on tonight (thinking between 1:30-2AM, EST) I would be more than willing to take a look for you.
interesting
This was an excellent second chapter, and I am quite glad that I have found it.
I look forward to reading more.
4238633 Thank you.
Did the numbers help break up the giant chapter?
They served as page breaks, though the chapter was not really long at all, compared to some I have read. (20k+ word chapters)
4238955 Very true, it's just that it felt long in comparison to the first chapter and at some points I thought I went too far.
Thank you again, your approval makes me feel a lot more confident about my work.
4239064 I sensed that this was gonna turn out to be an excellent fic. I was right.
4239072 Okay, now you're just stroking my ego
Thanks 
I love this story so much, keep up the great work.
This story, under the official vote of me, gets 8/10 duck faces:
4318775 Whoo Hooo!!!!
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Ok... that knock on the door at the end of the chapter seems ominous.
4320316 Something I hoped you'd think.
4321591 is that Twily?
4362657 No, she doesn't show for a while.
But Lyra is mentioned in the next chapter.
4366318 Lyra oh no everyhuman for himself!
4366419
You'll see
I personally don't like deleting comments Silver Octane, but I'll let it slide... this time.
Woah... I think I can see where this is going...
4463854 You think do you??
Or maybe you are thinking just what I want you to think. Hmmm 
think about that one.
4464242 good answer, but you might only be trying to get me confused, now can't you? So that means it is both but can only be one. That leads to a certain problem... Still, seeing as to how the story is developing, I believe what I think it's going to happen is the most logical course if action, of course that is, unless you were to change some important plot or I'm simply going the wrong direction...
Woah... Confused myself and headache...
4464379 No, what you're thinking will play a roll, but it won't be the... main (I guess that's the right word) direction for the story.
4467041 uh... Okay.
Only three hours? That was quick.
How old is the main character?
4610139 odd question to ask, I think I put him at 24? I know that if you read and thought about some things you'd find out, but that might have been too cryptic, I don't know.
Why do you ask?