Deep, pulsing drumming.
The beat of the jungle.
Will the mysteries of the past be brought to light?
Or will Equestria fall to the whim of Jumanji?
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*rEADS THE TITLE, SEES jUMANJI* SHIT YEEEEEAAAAAAHH!!!!!
Spike sat in the boiler room at Everfree power (He was the main power sourse for the turbine generators) "Where did ya go?" He asked looking at a bag of Hay Puff Marsh mellows.
"Crank it up Spike!" The forman bellowed.
MORE!
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Don't worry, Spike plays a very important part in this story.
"Jumanji"... In Equestria...
As a man who still owns the board game that tied in to the movie and damn near wore out a VHS copy as a kid, I say finish this. For the love of God, finish it. How much will it take... SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!!!!
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Ahm werkin' on eet, ah swears.
Jes hol' on tah yer miniture horses, will ye?
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I understand. I just always wanted to say "SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!!"
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I like free money. But I don't think I'd be able to accept any as this story is right now. It has a fair amount of effort I have to put into it.
a little reminder, the way have it written like she has more than one mother, when stating something is belonging to someone in some way you say it like "friend of your mother's", I noticed the same error repeating itself a few times in this chapter, maybe you should read through what's been posted and fix all the little errors you can find.
Enjoying the story, I hope we get a name for this new character next chapter.
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Thank you for pointing those out, I gave the chapter another once over, and I think I got them all.
nice drums,
more
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You... don't realize how appropriate that pic is for this story...
5903599 That's from my story "Raritys Egg" ,,,,,So you can use it if you want.
5903585 also watch this
Okay, so Sweetie Belle had a child who she named Rarity after her older sister vanished?
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Yes.
Hm, I am quite interested in this story so far.
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Glad to hear it.
Are things popping up behind her going to be a thing, also unhinged Rarity... that's a thing, cool. Enjoyed the story so far, as a kid was always a fan of the movie so it's nice to see something like this hope you can pull it off proper.
I still think code monkey or primitive speak would me more likely of Sweetie Belle than Rarity prime unless she was poisoned in some way, and only for a lack of communication with other ponies in her native tongue. I don't even think Alan? from the original Jumanji movie was incapable of generic speech. Then again, maybe Rarity cheated somehow.
It's alive!
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Well, that explains the broken piece. Rarity must have next to no social contact if her speech patterns are on par with a G1 Dinobot
Great job so far^^ keep up the good work^^
Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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Jumanji is a very dark concept if you really think about it. I'm floored that it (the original story and subsequently the Robin Williams movie) came out as child friendly as it did. You have a vaguely magical, suspiciously sapient board game that not only screws with the lives of the players, but absolutely goes out of its way to kill off as many innocent bystanders as possible through sheer negligence.
It then tries to murder it's players by increasing the difficulty of the challenges it spits out the closer said players get to winning, making it so that its changes remain permanent in the real world. It has shown that its effects persist with time, so you can't just turn away and say it's not your problem after the first bad roll.
As to why the tag of dark? Equestria is in a dark time, it's been twenty to thirty odd years or so since one of the element bearers has gone missing and Equestria... Kinda had to move on without her. Harmony is unbalanced, the world has steadily grown darker and less friendly. No ones really noticed the gradual change... But they all know something important has gone wrong.
Hmmm... I want to read this... but looking at the upload dates... this has been around for four years, and it has been updated four times... with around a year between updates...
I'm not sure if I am willing to commit to a story if it doesn't update.
So I shall wait. If this is updated within a reasonable fashion. Both word count wise and time wise, I shall read. Until that happens, I am sorry. As much as this looks like it would be a great ride, I need some more proof on whether it is dead or not.
((So sorry. I've just read too many fics that will never be finished.))