When Heartbreak falls ill, Fluttershy takes it upon herself to not only make sure she gets better, but afterwards try to teach her a lesson about kindness! But things are easier said than done, especially with the animals giving H.B. an evil eye...
After Twilight was banished, she had traveled to a remote town outside of Equestria called Grazil. Now, she has found a way home. But it isn't the same as she once remembered. For example, where are her friends?
Vinyl and Octavia have been dateing and living to gether for a long time. Everything is great but Octavia is a changeling.Will the other changelings ever catch up to her, will Vinyl find out, will Lyra and Bon Bon get sound proofing for their room?
shit....if this EVER does happen......i will forever be endeted to serve under princess Luna and princess Celestia.... until the day i die....*smirks* .....long live equestria.....
Definetly an interesting and original premise. Also, the use of gray and grey morality is a great way to go, it really makes the factions spring to life, and adds realism versus the black and white common in stories. I like this one !
Are you going to do any follow ups to this, I'd really like to see more on "human equestria" , maybe a few pov stories following characters on both sides, with a first person view on each area, like maybe a disillusioned brony or a citizen or solider fighting in an opposing faction.
OK. I dont know, WHAT was that. But it was awesome.
shit....if this EVER does happen......i will forever be endeted to serve under princess Luna and princess Celestia.... until the day i die....*smirks* .....long live equestria.....
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No one comments. I love the fact that people read it but I'd like to know if it was at least enjoyable.
Loooooooved it!
Bravo this story has proven most enjoyable indeed!!!
What a story.
I liked, I QQed, this was amazing. I salute you good sir!
963 Glad you guys are enjoying it, now we just gotta convince seth to put it on ED
*Face hoof* That is all I can say about this story
1788 Well isn't someone a little hater? You could have at least provided constructive criticism.
Slightly reminds me of the terminator.
Definetly an interesting and original premise. Also, the use of gray and grey morality is a great way to go, it really makes the factions spring to life, and adds realism versus the black and white common in stories. I like this one !
Are you going to do any follow ups to this, I'd really like to see more on "human equestria" , maybe a few pov stories following characters on both sides, with a first person view on each area, like maybe a disillusioned brony or a citizen or solider fighting in an opposing faction.
As mush as that idea intrigues me, I will do the right thing, as in dawn some Fallout style T-60d power armor and start wrecking.
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