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On one of the most mundane of Mondays all year round, Ponyville is unexpectedly visited by a very familiar and yet very confused group of beloved friends from an alternate reality. What happens when "Twyla", a human teacher from Earth, comes face to face with herself in the form of Twilight Sparkle? Will the two facets of time-space fold upon one another or will these two almost identical groups of friends work together to overcome the strange set of circumstances that have followed these humans into Equestria?

Authored and illustrated by shrimpshogun based on the original concept by AngelicoreXX.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 131 )

*Reads the title* Huh... Well, I'm flattered. Ill stick it in my read later list!

WHOA!

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

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I was about to message you about this, but you beat me to it.:twilightoops:
Damn you and your ninja skill.:twilightangry2:

407464 ʞinda liʞe some sort of squirrel.

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Two things:
A) Fuck you and your backwards lettering.
B) I fucking hate squirrels

407496 Aww, I would ʞill for some love right now. You always be hatin.

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WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME SO?:raritydespair:

You need to put some spellcheck up in this bitch, but I'm liking where it's going.

I'm going to be late to work most liekly. My own fault. Good read, I can hardly wait to see how they react.

nice! Ah´ll be awaiting for another chapter ^^

BR

I await the next installment.:rainbowkiss:

BR

I await the next installment.:rainbowkiss:

I love this, awaiting next chapter! Also, creative human names!

FIRST! :pinkiehappy:

Also, great storyline...

MOre chapters MORE i love it!

NO!!!! It stopped at the best part.:fluttershysad:

...because everypony loves a good scrap...

At the close to orgasm part I lol'd.

what she experenced is what steven colbert would call a joygasm

Really good! Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:
Also.... MOAR! :flutterrage:

Just finished "editing" the first chapter. Unfortunately we "forgot" to proof read it before uploading it. Yeah, i know right? Ain't I a riot.

Anyways, enjoy. Now with 90% less grammatical errors! I think!

Also Chapter 3 should be up in a few days at the most.

468774 I concur, that lizard must face death...... kill da lizard Komodo dragon thingy.

Hmm taking context clues discord probely went to earth oh I can't wait till he gets shot at lol what dumbass!:rainbowkiss:

Felt a bit rushed towards the latter half.
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Who'd steal Discord's power? :pinkiehappy: I would! Too much fun to pass up!
I would abuse those powers SO bad! I'd turn the moon to literal cheese, I'd turn goldfish into (living) snack-food goldfish, Pigs would fly, Army men toys would go to war with each other, I'd re-create a 'Fragouts Are Magic' fan fic situation but with the Halo players going up against Gears players in 100 on 100 matches with infinite ammo and five lives each (nobody would actually 'die' they'd just ghost about until the next match, I'd censor EVERYONE'S cussing with animal noises, REAL guns would shoot out water or hot sauce instead, Eating something spicy enough would make you breath fire, Babies would be born yelling "LEROOOYYY JENKIIIINNNNS!", The 'Nyan Cat' would pay the 'Double Rainbow' guy a visit, Mimes would NEVER shut up, Clowns would become grumpy, Twilight (that crappy vampire romance story) would actually become enjoyable, brown cows would produce chocolate milk, money WOULD grow on trees, In casinos everybody would win for a minute, then lose for a minute back and forth over and over, Trekkies would declare that Star Wars is better, hardcore star wars fans woudl declare that Jar Jar Binks is the best thing since lightsabers, and finally, Ditsy Doo would become president of the United States.

Wow, that went on longer than I intended. Whoops. :derpyderp2:

And the plot thickens to the point of oatmeal.

im guessing its human discord maybe ;D

"A soft blend of creamy vanilla cake filling and crisp apple held up a stratum of thick chocolate cookie mix pancaking an entire layer of vanilla and cinnamon pudding. The pattern had repeated at least three times throughout the chocolate covered guilty pleasure. Adorned against the railing of highest layer was a maw of apple crescents held up by chocolate gums. Sitting like a trophy at the very center laid a batch of caramel covered candy apples."

That sounds like one messy cake! :pinkiegasp:

505735 But it's the best kind of mess!

504538 Mmmm oatmeal.

504538 And I said, "Oatmeal? Are you crazy!?"

Well after all that dead and magic paradox... im fealing a bit heartbroken and sad... this isnt going to end well now that Discord is more a psycopath than a prankerster

..... Holy hell! Twilight OP Sparkle can turn back the hands of time and support a large scale paradox?


That is one pony you don't want to fuck with
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RETURN OF THE FLIM FLAM BROTHERS

Wait.... is dizty been made evil and OMG twilight just became 20 percent cooler!!!!!!! great chapter:pinkiehappy:

Alternate dimension forms of the Mane 6....

...Meeting themselves...

SWEET CELESTIA, FOR ONCE! CREATIVITY IN A HiE FIC!

...Whoa, where did THAT come from?

Uh oh... Ditzy's gone crazy...

Hey the humans have gasoline with them and the flimflam brothers are being mean.... so I was thinking what a tragic shame it would be if there farm was on burned to the ground one day. Anyone agree?:rainbowlaugh:

Only one flaw I saw in there. A mango isn't a citrus but a stone fruit, like a peach has one pit not seeds. But interesting story anyway. :twilightsmile:

Normally, Twilight herself would’ve easily led the charge, but without her Ponyville would’ve needed every unicorn on hand. Rarity, Lyra, Minuette, Lemon Hearts, Amethyst Star, Clockwork, Graphite, Ponet, and Vinyl Scratch amongst many others corralled an enormous magical cloud hovering over Ponyville. Even the local fillies gave it their all including Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara, and even the bumbling Snips and Snails tossed up whatever sparks they could conjure.

Wait what?
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Also, my mind is acting up again:
“Now go my minion, yatta, yatta, yatta, go do something terrible I guess to all of those friends who hate you so much. Just give me some yummy chaos already!”

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Yeah, I guess that's a botch on my part. I was using a list of unicorns for that bit and I guess Diamond Tiara got mixed up in there somehow, lol. Funny how she was somehow useful for once besides being a stereotype. Bless her heart.

Hehehe, I was hoping someone would pick up on that. You're my newest favorite person in the world.

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