Looks good so far.

Bone Crusher seems pretty reasonable for being a psychotic raider, who kills everypony in sight (I wonder how the pegasi and the alicorn got there)

But there are two things I don't really understand yet:
- the title of your chapter. Would you care to explain, pretty please?
- who/what is Bone Crusher? Is he/she/it a a mare or a stallion or some kind of marlion, a swiss army pony if you like.
Though the male parts speak for themselves, the perk refers to him/her/it as a "dark mare", so...

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Huzzah, my first comment!

The title is a joke, honestly. I explained the story to /foe/ asked for a title because I couldn't think of one, and... The title is It's Not Gay if it's a Feminine Dick. I kid you not. I was going to change it, but I just couldn't think of something to replace it. Later chapters will have more serious titles most likely.

Bone Crusher is what's known as a hermaphrodite. She has both male and female reproductive organs, but she identifies with female pronouns because she's more of a female who happens to have a dick than anything.

I hope I answered your questions well!

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So (he)/she is the swiss army knife.

Just one other question: are the pegasi BC exterminated some enclave ones or just your friendly nieghborhood collection of dashites. For a wasteland grunt like Gunslinger a pegasus shouldn't be a too common sight in the wasteland, so I wonder why he's not wondering.

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Exterminated Enclave ones. The reason Gun wasn't taking too much note of there being pegasi was because he was dumbfounded by the sheer amount of bodies, the same reason he didn't take too much note of the not as rare as a pegasus but still rare Alicorn.