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SleepIsforTheWeak


I want to be a lion, everybody wants to pass as cats. We all want to be big big stars, but we got different reasons for that...

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He wouldn’t wish fame on his worst enemy.

Every few years he sees the stars in the eyes of the new hopeful recruits and he shakes his head and tsks under his breath in bitter wryness as their hopeful faces blind him. And every year his thoughts jeer, “They don’t know what they’re getting themselves into.”

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Very interesting take on Soarin you have here.

4114177 I blame it on the Eminem.

Deep as the pits of hell

I have to say you have captured my life perfectly

An interesting idea but I feel the execution could have been better and by that I feel it takes to much from eminem and that your not telling your on story just retelling his. I think you have a good idea and that's what drew me to it, but it needed to be more your own idea and take on the character instead of just taking someone else's story and if that is what your going for than put more into it so we can truly feel for what the character is feeling and going through. You need to show more and tell less.

Nicely done. I like how you show the slow destruction of Soarin's psyche.

An excellent piece of work.

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