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Majin Syeekoh


We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.

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This story is a sequel to I, Changeling


Orpheus is a thestral guard under the employ of Princess Luna. These are his misadventures.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 37 )

Orpheus, is the name of an OC, I created awhile back ago, only spelt different.

4106461 I was giving you a compliment, so don't thank me, I'm just saying that an OC I created awhile back is also named Orpheus, just spelt differently.

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4106492 Equestrian Wars Book 1: Rise of the Dominion, I had to rewrite it though because I wasn't happy with where it was going, but it's now completely being rewriting.

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4106516 Ok. Why don't you send me a link when it's done?

Oh damn, stars so hot they glow UV. Wow.

I don't understand
Who is Orpheus my man
Is it a changeling

4108418 ... it's literally in the description.

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4108418 He's a bat pony in Luna's night guard.

Fairly big wall of text near the middle, please break it up so it's less painful. Other than that, good chapter!

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4111145 Well, I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to keep it down to earth despite all the impossible feats that Luna pulls off...I hope I've succeeded so far.

My fist thought when I saw the title.

Thou art I and I am thou. From the sea of thy soul I awaken. I am Orpheus, Master of Strings.

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4119232 Thank you.

What did you think of the story?:duck:

You're using my old avatar art as your cover art. Please change it to something else.
Vivas Noctus belongs to my Luna's Story trilogy.

~Aegis

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4124090 Ok, changed.:twilightsmile:

Thank you for not downvoting my story, by the way. You could have easily done that upon seeing your picture, but you didn't.:yay:

*blinks*

Pony.

Huh.

*runs in terror*

Trying to rob... a guard... next to the Princess of the Night. They're disguised so I can't say it's foolish but I do know that things aren't about to go well.

Also, could've used more descriptions of the inside of The Hive.

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4125106 Eh, I suppose you're right. I should really try to hammer out my descriptions more. I was focusing more on the character interactions, though. It's still no excuse for why I shouldn't have done both.

but he electrocuted you! From what I understand, that’s dangerous to ponies!

:rainbowlaugh: at immortal alicorns not understanding. Well, onto your next changeling story!

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4135836 Thank you for getting that!:pinkiehappy:

Realy funny story.
I loved the part whit Celestia mindreading. :trollestia:

4124090 oh hai I think i've read one of your stories before

loved the murder Arson & Jaywalking trope

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5798648 Loitering is a terrible crime.

You don't even know.:twilightoops:

That changeling has seen it all, nothing will surprise him at this point.

Poor Orpheus, His sanity never stood a chance.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Snrk, I guess that's one way to win a diving race.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Yay, he helped Cutelings!

Now I wonder if changelings share dreams through the hive connecting.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Yeah, I never get why ponies sometimes think they griffons eat ponies, pony meat really isn't good.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Changeling's have the best parties.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Pfft, poor Orpheus, she's gonna get him killed.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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