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I am running from something I'm becoming, but becoming one means I'm running from all I am.
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Okay, that was wondrous!
Though I don't think it really deserves the dark tag. Unless you mean from Tirek's perspective.
This wasn't really very good...
The first 300 odd words are just the gif. Like, just what is in the gif.
There's a section where a dozen lines are just "APOLOGIZE" and "NEVER"
The twist in the middle was interesting if not particularly well executed.
I mean, this wasn't really bad, but I'm predicting it to be the weakest entry in your Week of Derpy by far. This one gets a no-vote, buddy. Sorry. Perhaps if I was a bigger Derpy fan I might have liked it more, but it was just a "meh" from me in the end.
5774978
Quite probably. It is either this or yesterday's story that is weakest, I felt.
They were both still fun to write, though. :P
5774872
All valid points.
BEST PRINCESS!
Start of fic:
Yes, suffer for making my darling ditzy cry.
At twist:
End: .............................o.k.then?
5774699 Honestly the dark tag made it better. I was expecting horrible things. Got cuddles.
“Oh yes yes yes yes yes! It’s going to be so much fun when you pay for what you’ve done!” cheered Pinkie; she twirled the wickedly sharp halberd grasped in her hoof. “Won’t it be fun?”
strikes again!!!
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My reaction:
At twist:
Man, that first part was indeed creepy. Then it got weird when they all started nuzzling him. And then we cut to Luna and it got funny. Aside from a "Random" tag, the four tags delivered as promised.
THIS IS AWESOME!
Well I was concerned for a moment, but I'm happy to see all my fears were nothing compared to the horrors that you put to paper here.
I think I loved everything about this story, from the elegant fake out to Luna's rehabilitation. This gets a gold star and an upward facing thumb. (Sorry I miss clicked the silver star button.)
I'll see you at the next Derpy filled chapter.
What's with the last two lines? They don't make any sense at all.
5839111
Luna is basically just mucking about, doing crossword puzzles about herself being awesome. Overall, not one of my better stories.
L-Majora?
Bravo. I did not expect so much fun from so few words. Well done.
It was pretty good.