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Zaid ValRoa


"Fanfic [has] been on the decline since the Aeneid." --Anonymous poster 18/03/15

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"He made a decision. He was going to make it out of this forest, and he was going to make it out alive."

When Big Macintosh went to the edge of the Everfree to keep an eye on his family’s trees, and prevent animals from attacking them, he couldn’t imagine the series of events that would unfold that night.

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So.
This is the first fanfiction I publish, and I hope you enjoy it.
Any and all feedback is appreciated. :twilightsmile:

SWK

So, Big Mac fought a werewolf and survived? The reaction of all the animals seemed to fit into the legend of that kind of wolf. Sadly, I would like to see more, even if this is obviously a OS.

Oh, a tiny mistake too, when Mac returns, you refer to his sister as a him, instead of her.

"He gave him an earful that would have normally made him feel guilty, but he was far too tired and hurt to notice."

Wouldn't it be better if it was a She?

Thanks for the story.

4107530. Whoops, missed that one.
It's fixed, and thank you for taking the time to read my story.

Any chance of you making a sequel?

7753110
Well, ain't this a blast from the past...

For a while I've wanted to remake of this, expanding it onto a full fledged story. I'll be finishing uni next week (yay!) and I'll come back to all my writing projects, so the chance of seeing more of Big Mac's forest adventures is there.

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